Topic: Nowadays, more people would rather purchase food than cook at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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Restaurants and
fastfood
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fast food
chains are blooming. More people prefer to buy ready to eat foods rather than prepare it at home.
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essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of
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trend. Purchasing from a restaurant or any food outlets
has been
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have been
very familiar to some people.
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is due to its
convinience
the state of being suitable or opportune
convenience
and availability.
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, a very busy person would save

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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