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Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

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There are several reasons why nowadays fathers take care about their children
instead
 of
work
.
Firstly
, if fathers didn’t study at school, they would be illiterate, and it will affect their future perspectives
such
 as these fathers
wouldn’t
 provide the full of opportunity.
Secondly
, Fathers might addicted drugs
such
 as doping, and it can
also
 influence their daily life.As a reason mothers should
work
 to provide the needlessly opportunity for their children.Eventually, Fathers should stay at home in order to care about their children. By regarding have not enough workplaces for men, it might be caused.Notwithstanding
,
Accept space
,
on the other hand
, disabling fathers could not
work
 at workplaces.
Consequently
,
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,
those should take care their children. In my opinion, I believe that if mothers
work
 more than fathers, it will have occurred to the relationships that mothers will have a higher position than fathers, it would be influenced their children and child would not be independent. I think that mothers
wouldn’t
 supply the acceptable of opportunities,
then
 it will be effected children’s behaviours. Children
also
wouldn’t
 feel enough content, they
wouldn’t
 be able to use their privileges. Notwithstanding
,
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,
on the other hand
, despite the above cited arguments
,
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,
I believe that authority should protect and preserve languages that are widely spoken. As a reason,
government
 should organize small groups in the schools as an office hours to implement communication.
Furthermore
,
Accept space
,
A minority languages should be used as a subject in the primary schools.Children could easily learn a foreign
language
.
Also
, the
government
 can preserve traditions and behaviour by spending money to protect these languages.
In other words
,
Accept space
,
we should protect and spread
this
language
 along the country in order to save
,
Accept space
,
because
language
 means that reminds us
,
Accept space
,
our ancestor’s history. In conclusion, if the
government
 will not protect a minority
language
,
this
 county’s history might be disappearing.Rather, it would be better if the
government
 offers a minority
language
 courses as a curriculum.
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