People are more mobile nowadays. They seldom live in one city all their lives. Why do you think this is happening? What are the consequences of this trend?

Number
Suggestion
A number
of factors contribute towards migration like unemployment, poverty,
provision
Suggestion
the provision
of basic necessities etc. People keep moving in search of better opportunities. Climatic changes
also plays
Suggestion
also play
role in moving to other cities. There are both
postive
characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
positive
and negative consequences. Positive in the sense of change in mood or excitement of moving to a new place if the person is more into outdoor activities.
Also
, new workplace with handsome salary is a plus point. Negative consequences
includes
Suggestion
include
influx
Suggestion
the influx
an influx
of too many
migrants which
Accept comma addition
migrants, which
will ultimately turn into
socio
relating to human society and its members
social
-economical disaster.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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