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Some believe that going to university is the best route to a successful career. While others believe that is it better to start work straight after high school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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A successful career is what everybody wants in the long run, but how to achieve that rises two different views
.
Accept space
.
one
Suggestion
One
 group thinks a path to a stable future is finishing
university
, at the same time others believe working right after graduating from high
school
 is
the better
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the best
 way. I agree with the
first
 view I mentioned. Those who choose to go to
university
 with the hope of a better career will succeed because they are learning theories of what they want to do in the future which contributes to the fundamentals of their
job
 later in life. They are more prepared to embark on new
job
 opportunities in the business world.
in
Suggestion
In
 the meantime, at
university
 they have a chance to take advantage of their professor's experiences and consult with them.
This
 can help them choose their profession wisely.
For example
, when I was finishing my bachelor's degree
in
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at
university
 and helping my professors gathering data for his classes, it made me realize I want to choose to teach as my future
job
.
Nevertheless
, some people believe that starting to work right after high
school
 might be a better decision. They consider
this
 approach more beneficial because it builds practical skills
such
 as problem-solving and work ethic.
these
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These
 applied skills will play an important part later in life and in comparison with their peers,
this
 trend will make them outstrip others.
Job
 experience is essential for most jobs so;
this
 group will be
one
 step closer to achieve their goals. Take Bill Gates as an
example he never
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example, he never
 finished
school
 and he became
one
 of the most successful people in the world. To conclude, there are two points of view on how to be successful in careers,
one
 is having higher education and the other is getting a
job
 after high
school
. I believe learning opportunities
provided in
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provided, in
university
 can be advantageous.

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