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Some people say that it is possilble to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

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Apparel and appearance have explained
alot
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a lot
 about human
culture
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 and civilization. Since it is the
culture
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 which defines the human values and characteristics over a period of hundreds of years. I belong to the ancient Indus valley of civilization which is as old as 5000 years and I feel proud about its ethnicity,
culture
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, tradition and language.
Culture
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 is defined and refined over the years as it would include and exclude different norms and traditions which their followers have been practising for their own good and
will
a deep hole or shaft dug or drilled to obtain water or oil or gas or brine
well
. It is the
culture
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 which tells how to deal with
unwanting
come up with (an idea, plan, explanation, theory, or principle) after a mental effort
inventing
 events so may we overcome it and live with dignity.
Culture
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 defines the attitude of a nation,
culture
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 brings all ethnicities together under a single umbrella and gives cherishes them.
Culture
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 builds up the character of a nation and gives a positive hope of prosperity. When a
culture
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 is rich it brings
on
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with
to
 it on their people who follows it.
cultures
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Cultures
 who encourages peace and harmony would definitely be reflected by the colourful clothing of their people.
Culture
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 in the tropical region would include apparel that may help you in facing the weather
accordingly
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. Clothing and
Culture
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 are in line with each other just as if you see a Britisher, a well
suited booted
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suited, booted
 man would tell a lot about his sophisticated
culture
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. A Turk would wear a colourful dress and turban, tell about the richness of the ottoman empire.
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, Chinese, Persians, Indians and Romans all these rich cultures are well represented by their items of clothing. So one can certainly make an opinion about one's
culture
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 by looking at their choice of clothes. And there isn't any harm in making an opinion unless it defies judging someone.

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