Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today’s world a lot of people have as main wish or life-purpose becoming rich, we are not quite sure about their principal motivation to accumulate

money

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, but I believe being able to help others in scarcity is the most important reason for some of them. The most valuable thing about being rich is relative,

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however we

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however, we

can observe carefully society to make some conclusions about what kind of things, values or behaviours people value the most.

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, one of the

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things that people do when they have an extra

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or when they get a promotion, is buying expensive things

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as cars, trips, or luxury clothes and bags.

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, human relationships start to change when people become rich,

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ones become friends with each others, they frequent fancy places, and compete for who has the best closet, car and even partner.

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can be illustrated by observing

hollywood

the film industry of the United States

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celebrities’s sentimental relations and their lifestyle exposed in their social media. One day they’re in love and married and the other day

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of them or themselves

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divorce and travelling on a

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an expensive vessel propelled by sail or power and used for cruising or racing

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, as if

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was the essence of life.

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, there are other popular examples that show as that altruist

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are the most important thing of becoming rich.

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, Bill and Melinda Gates, Ellon Musk, and other

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marked by correspondence or resemblance

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billionairs

a very rich person whose material wealth is valued at more than a billion dollars

billionaires

, are giving all their fortunes in order to solve the world’s most complicated challenges like climate change, hunger, diseases, and so on. More

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important, this

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business men and women are not just writing a check to charity, they are building whole

companys

an institution created to conduct business

companies

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and investing billions of dollars on their good causes. In conclusion,

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’m tempted to say that despite the fact that there is a lot of people that use

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just for pleasure, bragging and power, for me,

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is the opportunity to, on one hand, live well, but

on the other hand

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, help the world to become a better place. As we saw, there are a lot of good examples that allowed me to say that

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view, of

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as an instrument of change is not a crazy idea.