Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some persons think that there is no need in a
cinema
because of
ammount
a quantity of money
amount
amounts
of gadgets with
screen
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the screen
a screen
screens
, but some feel that to get
the most full
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the fullest
enjoyment with a
film
you should be
at
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in
specialy
in a special manner
specially
special
especially
made
place
for that.
Although
,
movie
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the movie theatre
theatre
is the best
place
to watch films due to its special acoustics and environment, I feel that there is no need to
visit
a
cinema
because of intensive speed of our
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
. On the one hand, visiting
movie
houses is a long-living tradition, that began when the
first
film
was produced in
19th centuary
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the 19th century
19th century
. Since
then
every single
movie
was filmed to be used in a special
place
for it, so that a music and a picture would be appropriate.
For example
,
New York
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the New York Film Academy
Film
Academy recently published
researchings
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research
researches
researching
in which
was compared
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were compared
feelings of the group of persons that was watching films via tablets and the other group that watched pictures in the
movie
theatre
. As the result, there was up to 15
percenteges
a proportion in relation to a whole (which is usually the amount per hundred)
percentages
percentage
of negative opinions about movies watched in the
cinema
and almost twice more percentages of negative reviews for pictures watched via tablets.
However
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe that due to an increasing speed of our lives we can't afford to spend our
time
for visiting
movie
houses.
On the other hand
, others say that it is not necessary to
visit
movie
theatres because of plenty of phones and tablets. They argue that
visit
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a visit
to a
movie
house takes
huge ammount
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a huge amount
huge amount
huge amounts
of
time
, like minutes spent
for
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in
a travel to the
place
and standing in a line for tickets or
pop-corn
corn having small ears and kernels that burst when exposed to dry heat
popcorn
.
Also you
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Also, you
can't just pause the
film
for answering an important call, getting some more snacks or visiting a toilet.
For instance
,
recent social survey
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a recent social survey
in New York
city
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City
showed that
majority
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the majority
a majority
of working people watch movies with the help of their devices during their way to a work, preparing their meal, washing dishes or doing their
excercises
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercises
. I
therefore
believe that it is not necessary to
visit
a
movie
theatre
to watch moving pictures nowadays because modern people don't have much
time
for
this
. In conclusion, some persons say that
movie
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the movie theatre
theatre
is a relict because of
huge ammount
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the huge amount
huge amount
huge amounts
of
Iphones
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iPhones
and
Ipads
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IPads
iPads
Ipads'
, and the other
think
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thinks
that the true enjoyment
from
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of
a
film
could be get only in
cinema
. Despite the fact, that a human gets the best impression from the
film
watching in
movie
theatre
, I think it is a best option for a modern person to watch films via smartphone or
Ipad
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iPad
IPad
pad
IP ad
paid
due to a lack of free
time
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Mobile Viewing
  • Cost-efficient
  • Time-efficient
  • Personalized experience
  • Immersive
  • Cinematic experience
  • Surround sound
  • Collective experience
  • Technical superiority
  • Sensory experience
  • Social hubs
  • Cultural events
  • Distractions
  • Preservation
  • Filmmaking art
  • Cinematographic nuances
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