Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some persons think that there is no need in a

cinema

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because of

ammount

a quantity of money

amount

amounts

of gadgets with

screen

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the screen

a screen

screens

, but some feel that to get

the most full

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the fullest

enjoyment with a

film

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you should be

at

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in

specialy

in a special manner

specially

special

especially

made

place

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for that.

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,

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movie

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the movie theatre

theatre

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is the best

place

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to watch films due to its special acoustics and environment, I feel that there is no need to

visit

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a

cinema

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because of intensive speed of our

lifes

a characteristic state or mode of living

lives

. On the one hand, visiting

movie

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houses is a long-living tradition, that began when the

first

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film

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was produced in

19th centuary

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the 19th century

19th century

. Since

then

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every single

movie

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was filmed to be used in a special

place

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for it, so that a music and a picture would be appropriate.

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,

New York

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the New York Film Academy

Film

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Academy recently published

researchings

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research

researches

researching

in which

was compared

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were compared

feelings of the group of persons that was watching films via tablets and the other group that watched pictures in the

movie

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theatre

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. As the result, there was up to 15

percenteges

a proportion in relation to a whole (which is usually the amount per hundred)

percentages

percentage

of negative opinions about movies watched in the

cinema

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and almost twice more percentages of negative reviews for pictures watched via tablets.

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,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

believe that due to an increasing speed of our lives we can't afford to spend our

time

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for visiting

movie

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houses.

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, others say that it is not necessary to

visit

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movie

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theatres because of plenty of phones and tablets. They argue that

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visit

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a visit

to a

movie

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house takes

huge ammount

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a huge amount

huge amount

huge amounts

of

time

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, like minutes spent

for

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in

a travel to the

place

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and standing in a line for tickets or

pop-corn

corn having small ears and kernels that burst when exposed to dry heat

popcorn

.

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Also you

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Also, you

can't just pause the

film

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for answering an important call, getting some more snacks or visiting a toilet.

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recent social survey

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a recent social survey

in New York

city

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City

showed that

majority

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the majority

a majority

of working people watch movies with the help of their devices during their way to a work, preparing their meal, washing dishes or doing their

excercises

the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit

exercises

. I

therefore

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believe that it is not necessary to

visit

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a

movie

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theatre

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to watch moving pictures nowadays because modern people don't have much

time

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for

this

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. In conclusion, some persons say that

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movie

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the movie theatre

theatre

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is a relict because of

huge ammount

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the huge amount

huge amount

huge amounts

of

Iphones

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iPhones

and

Ipads

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IPads

iPads

Ipads'

, and the other

think

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thinks

that the true enjoyment

from

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of

a

film

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could be get only in

cinema

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. Despite the fact, that a human gets the best impression from the

film

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watching in

movie

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theatre

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, I think it is a best option for a modern person to watch films via smartphone or

Ipad

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iPad

IPad

pad

IP ad

paid

due to a lack of free

time

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.