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Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals make some action. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is irrefutable that
environment
 plays a crucial role in everyone's life. Few citizens hold
this
 idea that the problems regarding surroundings are huge for human beings to elucidate, another section of society think that only
government
 cannot solve the environmental issues without the help of people. In
this
 essay I will discuss both the perceptions and at the end, I will give my view.
First
 of all, no doubt in these days environmental problems is increasing day by day and these are huge for a single person to solve it.
This
 is because of the big amount of
plastic
 is used on products.
For example
, so many packages of
plastic
 layer use in every single product.
Secondly
, local people throw their garbage at anywhere.
This
 is due to lack of proper dustbin in every society.
Furthermore
, the people who think that
government
 cannot control, environmental issues alone unless individuals follow rules and regulations regarding environments. It is the duty of
government
 to make proper rules about these types of issues.
Moreover
, industry should reduce the package of products and
instead
 of
plastic
 bags they should pack items in paper bags. According to me, it is the duty of both governments as well as every single person. Authority should put a huge amount of fines who break the rules.
In addition
 to
this
, The
Government
 should add many dustbins in every society so that the garbage should put proper place. And the individuals should
also
 follow the rules and save their
environment
 and should buy the products that have less amount of
plastic
 used. Overall, though the environmental issues are huge, but if both the
government
 as well as individuals does proper care regarding
environment
 we can save it. Every single person should follow the rules and regulations to save our
environment
.

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