The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

These days, many countries of the world are currently experiencing a
problems
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problem
of rapidly growing vehicles and it's causing a
number
of problems.
Similarly
, in Britain, the
first
car was introduced in 1888. In 2000 there are about 29 million vehicles is on
road
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the road
roads
a road
in Britain. Some people believe it would be better for them to
use
public
transportation
instant of private cars. In my opinion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
agree that, people should have to
considered
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consider
carefully before deciding to purchase any
car and
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car, and
should
encouraged
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encourage
the public
transportation
rather than private vehicles.
Firstly
, the main purpose of a
vehicles
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vehicle
is to
travel
people one place to another.
For instance
, if the
number
of people start using public
transportation
than it might be
help
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helping
to reduce pollution to some extent.
Secondly
, public
transportation
vehicles are generally run on CNG, it does not affect
environment
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the environment
. There are many alternatives that people should
use
to
travel
.
For example
, Singapore is one of the only country who banned the manufacturing of any kind of vehicles.
It
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It's
encouraging people to
use
public
transportation
only.
Furthermore
, it is
also
good for the environment as well as country economy, as
number
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the number
of people
travel
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travelling
from public
transportation
and a
vest
unusually great in size or amount or degree or especially extent or scope
vast
number
of taxes will be collected from these
transportation
system
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systems
.
On the other hand
, International laws
also
introduced
new law according
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a new law, according
a new law according
new laws according
the new law according
to control car ownership and the
use
of
second
cars.
For instance
, in India, the limited life of
an
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a
diesel
vehicles
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vehicle
is around 10 years and 15 years
for
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of
petrol. Reason behind
this
is that
diesel
vehicles is producing more pollution than petrol.
Secondly
, people should concern about our environment and using eco-friendly vehicles. In
conclude
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concluding
, It is clear that more
diesel
vehicles will
producing
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produce
more pollution and government should limit the life of
diesel
vehicles and encouraging people to
travel
from
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by
public
transportation
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reliance on
  • regulate
  • traffic congestion
  • pollution
  • public health
  • sustainable development
  • alternative forms of transport
  • car ownership
  • balancing benefits and drawbacks
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