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The advantages and disadvantages of using smart phone

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The advantages and disadvantages of using
smart
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smart phones
a smart phone
phone
Smartphone
 have been recently in the hand of many of most people
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people
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People
 cannot skip any minute without checking their
phone
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nowadays
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Nowadays
 people tend to have more than two devices. There are many advantages and disadvantages of using
smartphone
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a smartphone
smartphones
. Smart phones are one of
application
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the application
 of technology
revaluation
a drastic and far-reaching change in ways of thinking and behaving
revolution
.
Scientist
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The scientist
A scientist
 cannot pass period of time without producing new features in new generations and that’s for every mark. Smartphones have many advantages
first
 of all, they facilitate connection between people themselves
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 they just press or dial up to be able to talk to their relatives or friends
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Second
, by using
smartphone
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a smartphone
smartphones
, you can send school or college assessments by transfer files, documents and upload videos too.
Thirdly
, by using
smartphones people
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smartphones, people
 can learn
new language
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a new language
 or develop it
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 they can enhance pronunciation or acquire native like accents by applying repletion technique to develop accent reduction
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 assimilation
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 and linking voice
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In addition
, by using
smartphone you
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smartphone, you
 can recap your college level by depending on self-leaning
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 there are
many of tutorials
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many tutorials
 which you can follow at any time or levels as you prefer
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Moreover
, by using
smartphone you
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smartphone, you
 can protect your home, company by using
camera observation system
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a camera observation system
 which can record every minute in a place where a system is existed.
Last
 but not least, by using
smart
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smart phones
a smart phone
phone
, people can save people live or even animal – if they attached smart gadgets – by giving theme help
in
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at
 the right time if their
mobiles
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mobile
 phones send emergency calls.
For example
, there is a group of people who get
rescue
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rescued
 after getting lost in
mountain
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mountains
the mountain
. On
other hand
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the other hand
, there are disadvantages of smart phones and they are as many as advantages where society cannot deny or neglect. Some people can lose their social life because they become
addicts
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addicted
 to social media. The overusing of
smartphone
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smart phone
 can lead to acquiring unhealthy habits like staying at home and cannot be able to go out of
self-made cave
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the self-made cave
 whereas you lose your ability of losing weight. Many people cannot control their spending
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
; they used to put their credit card number and spending big amount of money in shopping via Jumna or amazon
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 In conclusion , smartphones have many advantages and disadvantages ; smart people can control using
smartphone
 and they don’t allow to be controlled by smart
phone
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