Some people believe it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The reaction in
bad
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bad situations
situation
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varies
person
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to
person
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. Some individuals make peace with it and remain calm while
other
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others
strive hard to bring themselves out of the
situation
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.
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This
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essay will discuss both aspects of people's reaction in a bad
situation
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. Sometimes, people deliberately put themselves in a challenging
situation
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and accept it gracefully. Through various researches, one of the reason for
this
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comes out to be people like to stay in a difficult
situation
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for some time in order to get positive outcomes in
near future
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the near future
. A study has been conducted at the university of Manchester related to fresh graduates who accept less paid job to gain more experience and understanding of practical work which benefit them in their future.
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Thus
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This
initial acceptance of difficult
situation
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leads to better opportunities in
future
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the future
makes people accept it.
On the other hand
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, there
exists
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exist
people who cannot tolerate to remain in
such
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situation
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for a long time and they struggle hard to
mold
form in clay, wax, etc
mould
made
it in their
favor
promote over another
favour
. Not everyone can afford to be in a negative
situation
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based on their responsibilities.
For
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instance if
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instance, if
a
person
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is not satisfied with the current position
at
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in
their
workplace but
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workplace, but
cannot afford to lose their job, they would make the most of their skills, abilities and perform well in all their dealings to get in the good books of their employer.
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, hard work and efforts can bring them out from
this
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difficult
situation
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. To conclude, I would say it totally depends on a
person
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how he reacts in a
situation
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based on their circumstances and responsibilities. Sometimes it is alright to remain in a bad
situation
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in order to get the advantages later, but if the
situation
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is getting out of hands
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then
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than
hard work and dedication is the key to cope up with it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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