The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

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Brick by brick the place of the Internet

rises

come into existence; take on form or shape

arises

in our

life

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lives

. Some families have given up to watch TV an to listen to the radio due to

webservices

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web services

such

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Youtube

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YouTube

have replaced them. Far as I am concerned the

tradition

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traditional

shops will be absolutely changed in the near future. From my perspective the recent burning growth of the online shopping is quite predictable, as Bill Gates said “If your business is not on the Internet,

then

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your business will be out of business”. At the dawn of an online marketing. There are mostly reasons

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for

that, but

first

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of all a choice of some products is more comfortable in the online markets than in the offline ones.

For example

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, only after reading in the Internet forums a lot of information an feedbacks of

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

users any gadget, I buy it. It is convenient for me when I can add to cart,

for example

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, several models of a phone, pick up information about each ones and choice the best offer.

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, using the

webservices

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web services

which allow to compare the prices in

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

shops help to save money. So

buing

the act of buying

buying

being

bin

across the World Network is not only convenient, but

also

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profitable.

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, online shopping has given opportunities to get products

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from

sellers all over the world. So purchase scarce products have been significantly easier for people dwelling in a small town and unable to shop ones in the nearby malls.

On the other hand

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, preferring online marketing people may buy a pig in a poke. Meantime, in the traditional

store you

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store, you

can try it on, feel the quality of new things and see your modern look before you pay money.

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the most successful

marketing brand

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marketing, brand

offer to put on clothes buying through the Internet and return it when you get your order for free. In conclusion, I think that we will observe

rocketing rate

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the rocketing rate

of the online trading and in several decades the traditional shops will belong to the past.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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5 paragraphs

332 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

e-commerce
brick-and-mortar
physical stores
online retailers
retail apocalypse
digital economy
consumer behavior
sustainability
commercial landscape
high-street
consumer trends
augmented reality
showrooms
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