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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

#growth #shops #towns #cities
Brick by brick the place of the Internet
rises
come into existence; take on form or shape
arises
 in our
life
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lives
. Some families have given up to watch TV an to listen to the radio due to
webservices
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web services
,
such
 as
Youtube
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YouTube
 have replaced them. Far as I am concerned the
tradition
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traditional
 shops will be absolutely changed in the near future. From my perspective the recent burning growth of the online shopping is quite predictable, as Bill Gates said “If your business is not on the Internet,
then
 your business will be out of business”. At the dawn of an online marketing. There are mostly reasons
of
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for
 that, but
first
 of all a choice of some products is more comfortable in the online markets than in the offline ones.
For example
, only after reading in the Internet forums a lot of information an feedbacks of
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 users any gadget, I buy it. It is convenient for me when I can add to cart,
for example
, several models of a phone, pick up information about each ones and choice the best offer.
In addition
, using the
webservices
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web services
 which allow to compare the prices in
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 shops help to save money. So
buing
the act of buying
buying
being
bin
 across the World Network is not only convenient, but
also
 profitable.
Moreover
, online shopping has given opportunities to get products
by
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from
 sellers all over the world. So purchase scarce products have been significantly easier for people dwelling in a small town and unable to shop ones in the nearby malls.
On the other hand
, preferring online marketing people may buy a pig in a poke. Meantime, in the traditional
store you
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store, you
 can try it on, feel the quality of new things and see your modern look before you pay money.
However
 the most successful
marketing brand
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marketing, brand
 offer to put on clothes buying through the Internet and return it when you get your order for free. In conclusion, I think that we will observe
rocketing rate
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the rocketing rate
 of the online trading and in several decades the traditional shops will belong to the past.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • physical stores
  • online retailers
  • retail apocalypse
  • digital economy
  • consumer behavior
  • sustainability
  • commercial landscape
  • high-street
  • consumer trends
  • augmented reality
  • showrooms
  • carbon footprint
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