Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. Discuss this issue. Give reasons and suggest some solutions.

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of it, sports make us healthier and happier.

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of all, especially for children these kinds of practice are really necessary to develop theirs muscles, bones, and even mind.

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, always give your best". In conclusion, I totally agree with it that there are more pros than cons of teaching competitive sports for children, they could rise mature and being better people, facing challenges no

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how big they could be.Sports, nowadays have become an integral part of the young generation. The society has been discussing about the consequences of competitive sports in schools for

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essay will discuss why I strongly believe that all kinds of sports should be teach at

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First

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of all, the main idea behind the sports is that they maintain the body moving.

As a

Linking Words

result

Use synonyms

of it, sports make us healthier and happier.

Second

Linking Words

of all, especially for children these kinds of practice are really necessary to develop theirs muscles, bones, and even mind.

For example

Linking Words

, if they practiced regular activities more often,

such

Linking Words

as,

soccer

Use synonyms

, basketball or volley, their health will be improved a lot,

also

Linking Words

they could live more and more years.

Moreover

Linking Words

, working as a team, some young people develop the ability to understand how the world works, while some are the

firstt

preceding all others in time or space or degree

first

fairest

, others could be the

last

Linking Words

For instance

Linking Words

, when I was a child, I used to play

soccer

Use synonyms

with my friends during the high

school

Use synonyms

, and it was an amazing experience for all of us, because sometimes we won, and others we lost, but we never gave up.

Consequently

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this

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period taught us an important lesson for entire life,

that is

Linking Words

"no

matter

Use synonyms

the final

result

Use synonyms

matter

Use synonyms

how big they could be.Sports, nowadays have become an integral part of the young generation. The society has been discussing about the consequences of competitive sports in schools for

youngers

used of the younger of two persons of the same name especially used to distinguish a son from his father

younger

This

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essay will discuss why I strongly believe that all kinds of sports should be teach at

school

Use synonyms

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

498 words

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Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. Discuss this issue. Give reasons and suggest some solutions.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You are about to move to an English-speaking country to study. You have a friend living there and you want to find a part-time job. Write a letter to your friend - Explaining your scholar plans, - Your reasons to get a part-time job, - Suggest how he/she can help you finding a job.

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre.