Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Do you agree or disagree with the statement above? Give advantages and disadvantages of the TV. Include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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I agree with the affirmation that
television
has been
changing
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changed
negatively the communication between close people, as friends and Family. In the following paragraphs, I will show some pros and cons to explain
this
statement.
First
of all, as a
disadvantege
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantage
disadvantaged
I believe that there are many irrelevant programs on
television
that are not important and even though, people, usually like to watch them. It can be a waste of time that,
instead
watching TV, people should spend time together.
For example
, I visited my parents
uncontable
not able to be counted (e.g. because too many to count)
uncountable
times and I can tell that most of the visits, we spent much time watching soap opera that I do not like because is not real and just happen bad thinks
on
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of
about
it.
Instead
to keep
infront
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in front
of
television
we could talk with other about goals that we would like to achieve, dreams that we have, or even we could just talk about what
happend
come to pass
happened
in our
last
day.
Second
of all, talking about one benefit, there are some documentaries or informative programs that show relevant subjects like
historic
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history
, nature or even economic topics.
Therefore
, they can teach us important information and we can share
knowladge
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
with people
arroud
in the area or vicinity
around
us.
For instance
, I like to watch Discovery Channel because they show how the animals live and survive.
Knowladge
Suggestion
Knowledge
about animals is important to me.
Finally
, there
are
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is
a lot of terrible events that the
television
shows and I believe
that is
may influence a person who is not great
psycologicaly
with regard to psychology
psychologically
psychological
.
For example
, watching all these terrible
notice
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notices
can impact a person who is depressive because sometimes, she or he can think that there is no hope in the world. As a conclusion, there are more
disadvanteges
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantages
than advantages,
thus
television
does not help to improve
ours
of or belonging to us
our
relationships.
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