Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Do you agree or disagree with the statement above? Give advantages and disadvantages of the TV. Include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

I agree with the affirmation that

television

has been

changing

Suggestion

changed

negatively the communication between close people, as friends and Family. In the following paragraphs, I will show some pros and cons to explain

this

statement.

First

of all, as a

disadvantege

the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position

disadvantage

disadvantaged

I believe that there are many irrelevant programs on

television

that are not important and even though, people, usually like to watch them. It can be a waste of time that,

instead

watching TV, people should spend time together.

For example

, I visited my parents

uncontable

not able to be counted (e.g. because too many to count)

uncountable

times and I can tell that most of the visits, we spent much time watching soap opera that I do not like because is not real and just happen bad thinks

Suggestion

about

it.

Instead

to keep

infront

Suggestion

in front

television

we could talk with other about goals that we would like to achieve, dreams that we have, or even we could just talk about what

happend

come to pass

happened

in our

last

day.

Second

of all, talking about one benefit, there are some documentaries or informative programs that show relevant subjects like

historic

Suggestion

history

, nature or even economic topics.

Therefore

, they can teach us important information and we can share

knowladge

the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning

knowledge

with people

arroud

in the area or vicinity

around

us.

For instance

, I like to watch Discovery Channel because they show how the animals live and survive.

Knowladge

Suggestion

Knowledge

about animals is important to me.

Finally

, there

are

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a lot of terrible events that the

television

shows and I believe

that is

may influence a person who is not great

psycologicaly

with regard to psychology

psychologically

psychological

For example

, watching all these terrible

notice

Suggestion

notices

can impact a person who is depressive because sometimes, she or he can think that there is no hope in the world. As a conclusion, there are more

disadvanteges

the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position

disadvantages

than advantages,

thus

television

does not help to improve

ours

of or belonging to us

our

relationships.

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Complete response

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