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The table displays the average monthly rainfall for the year in five cities of the world. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The table illustrates the annual average
precipitation
 per month in 5
cities namely
Accept comma addition
cities, namely
 Hongkong, Tokyo, Jakarta, Cairo, and London. The scale is in
mm
. Overall, Jakarta has the highest monthly average
rainfall
, while in Cairo is the lowest in comparison with other cities. In the
first
 quarter of the year, the average
precipitation
 in Jakarta was 300
mm
 per month, which started to decrease in March to 21. The average monthly
rainfall
 in Jakarta and was steadily falling till August and reached 60
mm
. From September to December there were dramatic jump, 70 and 210 respectively. At the beginning of the period, monthly
precipitation
 was 24mm, which was rising with geometrical progression
to
Suggestion
in
 August to 380
mm
. After that, it was significantly
decreasing
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decreased
 and reached 34mm in December. The average monthly
rainfall
 in Tokyo showed the most
precipitation
 in the summer months, where it was in the range 150
mm
 and 190
mm
, while in the winter monthly
rainfall
 was about 50
mm
. The average
rainfall
 in Cairo was about 3-4
mm
, it reached its peak in August (27
mm
). The
precipitation
 in London was without significant fluctuation in the range between 45
mm
 and 80
mm
 per month.
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