You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies. How does competitiveness affect individuals? Is it a positive or negative trend? You should write at least 250 words.
It is often believed that it is
good characteristic
for people to have a sense of competition in most cultures. In my opinion, Suggestion
a good characteristic
competitiveness
among employees is beneficial, however
Accept comma addition
however, this
this
quality in daily life
is more negative. This
essay will describe how it affects to humans.
On the one hand, having sense
of competition is Suggestion
a sense
positive
in the working environment. Suggestion
positively
In other words
, competitions help people to grow professionally and make a career. According to the research of Harvard University, more than 75 percent of employees who was promoted in the first
3 years had sense of competition. Moreover
, 9 out of 10 top managers compete with others. Therefore
, I think that being ambitious in the workplace is great trait
, which helps to career.
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a great trait
On the other hand
, competitiveness
in the daily life
is counted as being jealous. In other words
, society does not accept envy human in their environment. For instance
, according to American Psychological Association person
, who always compares himself with others, starts to Suggestion
an American Psychological Association person
American Psychological Association people
the American Psychological Association person
degradate
. Especially, when reduce the level of land, as by erosion
degrade
human
wants to have the same cloth, Suggestion
the human
staff
like "new the tangible substance that goes into the makeup of a physical object
stuff
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" or "Suggestion
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IMac
", or even family, and wastes his energy to the negative emotions. People must compare himself only with him yesterday Suggestion
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that is
why I think that man
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that this man is
this
is more negative quality.
To conclude, however most
societies think that Accept comma addition
however, most
competitiveness
is advantage personal skill
, it depends on usage of quality in daily Suggestion
an advantageous personal skill
advantageous personal skill
life
or workplace. So, competitiveness
in the workplace is positive characteristics, but in routine life
it is more negative.Submitted by dinzhanovagulbakhyt on
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