The government should reduce the amount of money spent on local environmental problems and instead increase funding into urgent and more threatening issues such as global warming. To what extent do you agree?

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someone who works to protect the environment from destruction or pollution
environmentalists
at the government ought to focus on global warming rather than region en
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regional
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, I believe that money should be spent on both difficuit
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Solving local issues is much easier and more effective than global warming.
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, at the same time, governments should attach an attention to threatening issues as it has already affected our environment. Especially, the weather over the world is gradually much hotter annually and many endangered animals are facting e
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d, in order to slow down the serious change of the weather. In conclusion, no matter it is a local problem or global environmental issue, it is necessary to be considered due to its related connection.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urgent issues
  • global warming
  • local environmental problems
  • funding
  • redirecting funds
  • broader environmental health
  • financial efficiency
  • return on investment
  • cost-effective
  • holistic approach
  • moral and ethical considerations
  • resource allocation
  • long-term consequences
  • short-term impacts
  • competing environmental concerns
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