It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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college
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students to live
far
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farther
away from
home
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than live at
home
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with their parents. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. It is believed that to live in the
distance
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from parents for students is much better. I partly agree with
this
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viewpoint
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point
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as living far will teach to be independent as well as can
cause
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some social problems. On
one
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hand
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, there are some aspirants who cannot live or do not want to live at
home
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due to some circumstances.
For
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instance
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, some young people
study
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in cities, but live in rural areas and they have to live separately.
This
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can be beneficial for them as being far from family can teach the young
generation
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to be independent or how to survive in any situations. What's more, they will completely concentrate on the
study
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without disturbing from
house
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deals.
Thus
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, it makes clear why living in
distance
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is best for them.
On the other
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hand
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, when pupils live separately, they
face
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some emotional issues like feeling homesick, especially the ones in the
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first
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year
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because they get used to being under their
father
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’s wings and living in
comfort
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.
As a
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result
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, they cannot survive and leave
university
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. Another
disadvantage
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of being an independent
student
Use synonyms
is that it requires more
money
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to pay for their
accommodation
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, travelling and meals. So some teenagers have to
work
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, they
share
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work
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and studying and tear themselves apart
consequently
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they do not finish
college
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.
Therefore
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, living farther from
home
Use synonyms
can
cause
Use synonyms
some problems for young
generation
Use synonyms
. In
conclusion
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, it is believed that it is better for pupils to be farther away from
house
Use synonyms
than living at
home
Use synonyms
. Both situations are beneficial, but living with
father
Use synonyms
and
mother
Use synonyms
can be more comfortable and not hinder any issues during the
student
Use synonyms
's
life
Use synonyms
. It is believed that to live in the
distance
Use synonyms
from parents for students is much better. I partly agree with
this
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viewpoint
Use synonyms
point
Use synonyms
as living far will teach to be independent as well as can
cause
Use synonyms
some social problems. On
one
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hand
Use synonyms
, there are some aspirants who cannot live or do not want to live at
home
Use synonyms
due to some circumstances.
For
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instance
Use synonyms
, some young people
study
Use synonyms
in cities, but live in rural areas and they have to live separately.
This
Linking Words
can be beneficial for them as being far from family can teach the young
generation
Use synonyms
to be independent or how to survive in any situations. What's more, they will completely concentrate on the
study
Use synonyms
without disturbing from
house
Use synonyms
deals.
Thus
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, it makes clear why living in
distance
Use synonyms
is best for them.
On the other
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hand
Use synonyms
, when pupils live separately, they
face
Use synonyms
some emotional issues like feeling homesick, especially the ones in the
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first
Use synonyms
year
Use synonyms
because they get used to being under their
father
Use synonyms
’s wings and living in
comfort
Use synonyms
. As a
resultt
Suggestion
result it
result t
, they cannot survive and leave
university
Use synonyms
. Another
disadvantage
Use synonyms
of being an independent
student
Use synonyms
is that it requires more
money
Use synonyms
to pay for their
accommodation
Use synonyms
, travelling and meals. So some teenagers have to
work
Use synonyms
, they
share
Use synonyms
work
Use synonyms
and studying and tear themselves apart
consequently
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they do not finish
college
Use synonyms
.
Therefore
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, living farther from
home
Use synonyms
can
cause
Use synonyms
some problems for young
generation
Use synonyms
. In
conclusion
Use synonyms
, it is believed that it is better for pupils to be farther away from
house
Use synonyms
than living at
home
Use synonyms
. Both situations are beneficial, but living with
father
Use synonyms
and
mother
Use synonyms
can be more comfortable and not hinder any issues during the
student
Use synonyms
's
life
Use synonyms
.It is believed that to live in the
distance
Use synonyms
from parents for students is much better. I partly agree with
this
Linking Words
viewpoint
Use synonyms
point
Use synonyms
as living far will teach to be independent as well as can
cause
Use synonyms
some social problems. On
one
Use synonyms
hand
Use synonyms
, there are some aspirants who cannot live or do not want to live at
home
Use synonyms
due to some circumstances.
For
Linking Words
instance
Use synonyms
, some young people
study
Use synonyms
in cities, but live in rural areas and they have to live separately.
This
Linking Words
can be beneficial for them as being far from family can teach the young
generation
Use synonyms
to be independent or how to survive in any situations. What's more, they will completely concentrate on the
study
Use synonyms
without disturbing from
house
Use synonyms
deals.
Thus
Linking Words
, it makes clear why living in
distance
Use synonyms
is best for them.
On the other
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hand
Use synonyms
, when pupils live separately, they
face
Use synonyms
some emotional issues like feeling homesick, especially the ones in the
Linking Words
first
Use synonyms
year
Use synonyms
because they get used to being under their
father
Use synonyms
’s wings and living in
comfort
Use synonyms
.
As a
Linking Words
result
Use synonyms
, they cannot survive and leave
university
Use synonyms
. Another
disadvantage
Use synonyms
of being an independent
student
Use synonyms
is that it requires more
money
Use synonyms
to pay for their
accommodation
Use synonyms
, travelling and meals. So some teenagers have to
work
Use synonyms
, they
share
Use synonyms
work
Use synonyms
and studying and tear themselves apart
consequentlyy
(sentence connectors) because of the reason given
consequently
they do not finish
college
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.
Therefore
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, living farther from
home
Use synonyms
can
cause
Use synonyms
some problems for young
generation
Use synonyms
. In
conclusion
Use synonyms
, it is believed that it is better for pupils to be farther away from
house
Use synonyms
than living at
home
Use synonyms
. Both situations are beneficial, but living with
father
Use synonyms
and
mother
Use synonyms
can be more comfortable and not hinder any issues during the
student
Use synonyms
's
life
Use synonyms
.It is believed that to live in the
distance
Use synonyms
from parents for students is much better. I partly agree with
this
Linking Words
viewpoint
Use synonyms
point
Use synonyms
as living far will teach to be independent as well as can
cause
Use synonyms
some social problems. On
one
Use synonyms
hand
Use synonyms
, there are some aspirants who cannot live or do not want to live at
home
Use synonyms
due to some circumstances.
For
Linking Words
instance
Use synonyms
, some young people
study
Use synonyms
in cities, but live in rural areas and they have to live separately.
This
Linking Words
can be beneficial for them as being far from family can teach the young
generation
Use synonyms
to be independent or how to survive in any situations. What's more, they will completely concentrate on the
study
Use synonyms
without disturbing from
house
Use synonyms
deals.
Thus
Linking Words
, it makes clear why living in
distance
Use synonyms
is best for them.
On the other
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hand
Use synonyms
, when pupils live separately, they
face
Use synonyms
some emotional issues like feeling homesick, especially the ones in the
firstt
preceding all others in time or space or degree
first
year
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because they get used to being under their
father
Use synonyms
’s wings and living in
comfort
Use synonyms
.
As a
Linking Words
result
Use synonyms
, they cannot survive and leave
university
Use synonyms
. Another
disadvantage
Use synonyms
of being an independent
student
Use synonyms
is that it requires more
money
Use synonyms
to pay for their
accommodation
Use synonyms
, travelling and meals. So some teenagers have to
work
Use synonyms
, they
share
Use synonyms
work
Use synonyms
and studying and tear themselves apart
consequently
Linking Words
they do not finish
college
Use synonyms
.
Therefore
Linking Words
, living farther from
home
Use synonyms
can
cause
Use synonyms
some problems for young
generation
Use synonyms
. In
conclusion
Use synonyms
, it is believed that it is better for pupils to be farther away from
house
Use synonyms
than living at
home
Use synonyms
. Both situations are beneficial, but living with
father
Use synonyms
and
mother
Use synonyms
can be more comfortable and not hinder any issues during the
student
Use synonyms
's
life
Use synonyms
.It is believed that to live in the
distance
Use synonyms
from parents for students is much better. I partly agree with
this
Linking Words
viewpoint
Use synonyms
point
Use synonyms
as living far will teach to be independent as well as can
cause
Use synonyms
some social problems. On
one
Use synonyms
hand
Use synonyms
, there are some aspirants who cannot live or do not want to live at
home
Use synonyms
due to some circumstances. For
instancee
an occurrence of something
instance
instance e
instances
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, some young people
study
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in cities, but live in rural areas and they have to live separately.
This
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can be beneficial for them as being far from family can teach the young
generation
Use synonyms
to be independent or how to survive in any situations. What's more, they will completely concentrate on the
study
Use synonyms
without disturbing from
house
Use synonyms
deals.
Thus
Linking Words
, it makes clear why living in
distance
Use synonyms
is best for them.
On the other
Linking Words
hand
Use synonyms
, when pupils live separately, they
face
Use synonyms
some emotional issues like feeling homesick, especially the ones in the
Linking Words
first
Use synonyms
year
Use synonyms
because they get used to being under their
father
Use synonyms
’s wings and living in
comfort
Use synonyms
.
As a
Linking Words
result
Use synonyms
, they cannot survive and leave
university
Use synonyms
. Another
disadvantage
Use synonyms
of being an independent
student
Use synonyms
is that it requires more
money
Use synonyms
to pay for their
accommodation
Use synonyms
, travelling and meals. So some teenagers have to
work
Use synonyms
, they
share
Use synonyms
work
Use synonyms
and studying and tear themselves apart
consequently
Linking Words
they do not finish
college
Use synonyms
.
Therefore
Linking Words
, living farther from
home
Use synonyms
can
cause
Use synonyms
some problems for young
generation
Use synonyms
. In
conclusion
Use synonyms
, it is believed that it is better for pupils to be farther away from
house
Use synonyms
than living at
home
Use synonyms
. Both situations are beneficial, but living with
father
Use synonyms
and
mother
Use synonyms
can be more comfortable and not hinder any issues during the
student
Use synonyms
's
life
Use synonyms
.It is believed that to live in the
distance
Use synonyms
from parents for students is much better. I partly agree with
this
Linking Words
viewpoint
Use synonyms
point
Use synonyms
as living far will teach to be independent as well as can
cause
Use synonyms
some social problems. On
one
Use synonyms
hand
Use synonyms
, there are some aspirants who cannot live or do not want to live at
home
Use synonyms
due to some circumstances.
For
Linking Words
instance
Use synonyms
, some young people
study
Use synonyms
in cities, but live in rural areas and they have to live separately.
This
Linking Words
can be beneficial for them as being far from family can teach the young
generation
Use synonyms
to be independent or how to survive in any situations. What's more, they will completely concentrate on the
study
Use synonyms
without disturbing from
house
Use synonyms
deals.
Thus
Linking Words
, it makes clear why living in
distance
Use synonyms
is best for them. On the other
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had
, when pupils live separately, they
face
Use synonyms
some emotional issues like feeling homesick, especially the ones in the
Linking Words
first
Use synonyms
year
Use synonyms
because they get used to being under their
father
Use synonyms
’s wings and living in
comfort
Use synonyms
.
As a
Linking Words
result
Use synonyms
, they cannot survive and leave
university
Use synonyms
. Another
disadvantage
Use synonyms
of being an independent
student
Use synonyms
is that it requires more
money
Use synonyms
to pay for their
accommodation
Use synonyms
, travelling and meals. So some teenagers have to
work
Use synonyms
, they
share
Use synonyms
work
Use synonyms
and studying and tear themselves apart
consequently
Linking Words
they do not finish
college
Use synonyms
.
Therefore
Linking Words
, living farther from
home
Use synonyms
can
cause
Use synonyms
some problems for young
generation
Use synonyms
. In
conclusion
Use synonyms
, it is believed that it is better for pupils to be farther away from
house
Use synonyms
than living at
home
Use synonyms
. Both situations are beneficial, but living with
father
Use synonyms
and
mother
Use synonyms
can be more comfortable and not hinder any issues during the
student
Use synonyms
's
life
Use synonyms
.It is believed that to live in the
distance
Use synonyms
from parents for students is much better. I partly agree with
this
Linking Words
viewpoint
Use synonyms
point
Use synonyms
as living far will teach to be independent as well as can
cause
Use synonyms
some social problems. On
one
Use synonyms
hand
Use synonyms
, there are some aspirants who cannot live or do not want to live at
home
Use synonyms
due to some circumstances.
For
Linking Words
instance
Use synonyms
, some young people
study
Use synonyms
in cities, but live in rural areas and they have to live separately.
This
Linking Words
can be beneficial for them as being far from family can teach the young
generation
Use synonyms
to be independent or how to survive in any situations. What's more, they will completely concentrate on the
study
Use synonyms
without disturbing from
house
Use synonyms
deals.
Thus
Linking Words
, it makes clear why living in
distance
Use synonyms
is best for them.
On the other
Linking Words
hand
Use synonyms
, when pupils live separately, they
face
Use synonyms
some emotional issues like feeling homesick, especially the ones in the
Linking Words
first
Use synonyms
year
Use synonyms
because they get used to being under their
father
Use synonyms
’s wings and living in
comfort
Use synonyms
.
As a
Linking Words
result
Use synonyms
, they cannot survive and leave
university
Use synonyms
. Another
disadvantage
Use synonyms
of being an independent
student
Use synonyms
is that it requires more
money
Use synonyms
to pay for their
accommodation
Use synonyms
, travelling and meals. So some teenagers have to
work
Use synonyms
, they
share
Use synonyms
work
Use synonyms
and studying and tear themselves apart
consequently
Linking Words
they do not finish
college
Use synonyms
.
Thereforee
Suggestion
Therefore
Therefore e
Therefor
, living farther from
home
Use synonyms
can
cause
Use synonyms
some problems for young
generation
Use synonyms
. In
conclusion
Use synonyms
, it is believed that it is better for pupils to be farther away from
house
Use synonyms
than living at
home
Use synonyms
. Both situations are beneficial, but living with
father
Use synonyms
and
mother
Use synonyms
can be more comfortable and not hinder any issues during the
student
Use synonyms
's
life
Use synonyms
.It is believed that to live in the
distance
Use synonyms
from parents for students is much better. I partly agree with
thiss
denotes a person or thing
this
viewpoint
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point
Use synonyms
as living far will teach to be independent as well as can
cause
Use synonyms
some social problems. On
one
Use synonyms
hand
Use synonyms
, there are some aspirants who cannot live or do not want to live at
home
Use synonyms
due to some circumstances.
For
Linking Words
instance
Use synonyms
, some young people
study
Use synonyms
in cities, but live in rural areas and they have to live separately.
This
Linking Words
can be beneficial for them as being far from family can teach the young
generation
Use synonyms
to be independent or how to survive in any situations. What's more, they will completely concentrate on the
study
Use synonyms
without disturbing from
house
Use synonyms
deals.
Thus
Linking Words
, it makes clear why living in
distance
Use synonyms
is best for them.
On the other
Linking Words
hand
Use synonyms
, when pupils live separately, they
face
Use synonyms
some emotional issues like feeling homesick, especially the ones in the
Linking Words
first
Use synonyms
year
Use synonyms
because they get used to being under their
father
Use synonyms
’s wings and living in
comfort
Use synonyms
.
As a
Linking Words
result
Use synonyms
, they cannot survive and leave
university
Use synonyms
. Another
disadvantage
Use synonyms
of being an independent
student
Use synonyms
is that it requires more
money
Use synonyms
to pay for their
accommodation
Use synonyms
, travelling and meals. So some teenagers have to
work
Use synonyms
, they
share
Use synonyms
work
Use synonyms
and studying and tear themselves apart
consequently
Linking Words
they do not finish
college
Use synonyms
.
Therefore
Linking Words
, living farther from
home
Use synonyms
can
cause
Use synonyms
some problems for young
generation
Use synonyms
. In
conclusion
Use synonyms
, it is believed that it is better for pupils to be farther away from
house
Use synonyms
than living at
home
Use synonyms
. Both situations are beneficial, but living with
father
Use synonyms
and
mother
Use synonyms
can be more comfortable and not hinder any issues during the
student
Use synonyms
's
life
Use synonyms
.It is believed that to live in the
distance
Use synonyms
from parents for students is much better. I partly agree with
this
Linking Words
viewpoint
Use synonyms
point
Use synonyms
as living far will teach to be independent as well as can
cause
Use synonyms
some social problems. On
one
Use synonyms
hand
Use synonyms
, there are some aspirants who cannot live or do not want to live at
home
Use synonyms
due to some circumstances.
For
Linking Words
instance
Use synonyms
, some young people
study
Use synonyms
in cities, but live in rural areas and they have to live separately.
Thiss
Suggestion
This
can be beneficial for them as being far from family can teach the young
generation
Use synonyms
to be independent or how to survive in any situations. What's more, they will completely concentrate on the
study
Use synonyms
without disturbing from
house
Use synonyms
deals.
Thus
Linking Words
, it makes clear why living in
distance
Use synonyms
is best for them.
On the other
Linking Words
hand
Use synonyms
, when pupils live separately, they
face
Use synonyms
some emotional issues like feeling homesick, especially the ones in the
Linking Words
first
Use synonyms
year
Use synonyms
because they get used to being under their
father
Use synonyms
’s wings and living in
comfort
Use synonyms
.
As a
Linking Words
result
Use synonyms
, they cannot survive and leave
university
Use synonyms
. Another
disadvantage
Use synonyms
of being an independent
student
Use synonyms
is that it requires more
money
Use synonyms
to pay for their
accommodation
Use synonyms
, travelling and meals. So some teenagers have to
work
Use synonyms
, they
share
Use synonyms
work
Use synonyms
and studying and tear themselves apart
consequently
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they do not finish
college
Use synonyms
.
Therefore
Linking Words
, living farther from
home
Use synonyms
can
cause
Use synonyms
some problems for young
generation
Use synonyms
. In
conclusion
Use synonyms
, it is believed that it is better for pupils to be farther away from
house
Use synonyms
than living at
home
Use synonyms
. Both situations are beneficial, but living with
father
Use synonyms
and
mother
Use synonyms
can be more comfortable and not hinder any issues during the
student
Use synonyms
's
life
Use synonyms
.It is believed that to live in the
distance
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from parents for students is much better. I partly agree with
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • independence
  • responsibility
  • life skills
  • budgeting
  • cooking
  • time management
  • social integration
  • networking
  • extracurricular activities
  • academic resources
  • distractions
  • cultural exposure
  • personal development
  • global understanding
  • self-discovery
  • personal growth
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