It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

It is better for
college
students to live
far
Suggestion
farther
away from
home
than live at
home
with their parents. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. It is believed that to live in the
distance
from parents for students is much better. I partly agree with
this
viewpoint
point
as living far will teach to be independent as well as can
cause
some social problems. On
one
hand
, there are some aspirants who cannot live or do not want to live at
home
due to some circumstances.
For
instance
, some young people
study
in cities, but live in rural areas and they have to live separately.
This
can be beneficial for them as being far from family can teach the young
generation
to be independent or how to survive in any situations. What's more, they will completely concentrate on the
study
without disturbing from
house
deals.
Thus
, it makes clear why living in
distance
is best for them.
On the other
hand
, when pupils live separately, they
face
some emotional issues like feeling homesick, especially the ones in the
first
year
because they get used to being under their
father
’s wings and living in
comfort
.
As a
result
, they cannot survive and leave
university
. Another
disadvantage
of being an independent
student
is that it requires more
money
to pay for their
accommodation
, travelling and meals. So some teenagers have to
work
, they
share
work
and studying and tear themselves apart
consequently
they do not finish
college
.
Therefore
, living farther from
home
can
cause
some problems for young
generation
. In
conclusion
, it is believed that it is better for pupils to be farther away from
house
than living at
home
. Both situations are beneficial, but living with
father
and
mother
can be more comfortable and not hinder any issues during the
student
's
life
. It is believed that to live in the
distance
from parents for students is much better. I partly agree with
this
viewpoint
point
as living far will teach to be independent as well as can
cause
some social problems. On
one
hand
, there are some aspirants who cannot live or do not want to live at
home
due to some circumstances.
For
instance
, some young people
study
in cities, but live in rural areas and they have to live separately.
This
can be beneficial for them as being far from family can teach the young
generation
to be independent or how to survive in any situations. What's more, they will completely concentrate on the
study
without disturbing from
house
deals.
Thus
, it makes clear why living in
distance
is best for them.
On the other
hand
, when pupils live separately, they
face
some emotional issues like feeling homesick, especially the ones in the
first
year
because they get used to being under their
father
’s wings and living in
comfort
. As a
resultt
Suggestion
result it
result t
, they cannot survive and leave
university
. Another
disadvantage
of being an independent
student
is that it requires more
money
to pay for their
accommodation
, travelling and meals. So some teenagers have to
work
, they
share
work
and studying and tear themselves apart
consequently
they do not finish
college
.
Therefore
, living farther from
home
can
cause
some problems for young
generation
. In
conclusion
, it is believed that it is better for pupils to be farther away from
house
than living at
home
. Both situations are beneficial, but living with
father
and
mother
can be more comfortable and not hinder any issues during the
student
's
life
.It is believed that to live in the
distance
from parents for students is much better. I partly agree with
this
viewpoint
point
as living far will teach to be independent as well as can
cause
some social problems. On
one
hand
, there are some aspirants who cannot live or do not want to live at
home
due to some circumstances.
For
instance
, some young people
study
in cities, but live in rural areas and they have to live separately.
This
can be beneficial for them as being far from family can teach the young
generation
to be independent or how to survive in any situations. What's more, they will completely concentrate on the
study
without disturbing from
house
deals.
Thus
, it makes clear why living in
distance
is best for them.
On the other
hand
, when pupils live separately, they
face
some emotional issues like feeling homesick, especially the ones in the
first
year
because they get used to being under their
father
’s wings and living in
comfort
.
As a
result
, they cannot survive and leave
university
. Another
disadvantage
of being an independent
student
is that it requires more
money
to pay for their
accommodation
, travelling and meals. So some teenagers have to
work
, they
share
work
and studying and tear themselves apart
consequentlyy
(sentence connectors) because of the reason given
consequently
they do not finish
college
.
Therefore
, living farther from
home
can
cause
some problems for young
generation
. In
conclusion
, it is believed that it is better for pupils to be farther away from
house
than living at
home
. Both situations are beneficial, but living with
father
and
mother
can be more comfortable and not hinder any issues during the
student
's
life
.It is believed that to live in the
distance
from parents for students is much better. I partly agree with
this
viewpoint
point
as living far will teach to be independent as well as can
cause
some social problems. On
one
hand
, there are some aspirants who cannot live or do not want to live at
home
due to some circumstances.
For
instance
, some young people
study
in cities, but live in rural areas and they have to live separately.
This
can be beneficial for them as being far from family can teach the young
generation
to be independent or how to survive in any situations. What's more, they will completely concentrate on the
study
without disturbing from
house
deals.
Thus
, it makes clear why living in
distance
is best for them.
On the other
hand
, when pupils live separately, they
face
some emotional issues like feeling homesick, especially the ones in the
firstt
preceding all others in time or space or degree
first
year
because they get used to being under their
father
’s wings and living in
comfort
.
As a
result
, they cannot survive and leave
university
. Another
disadvantage
of being an independent
student
is that it requires more
money
to pay for their
accommodation
, travelling and meals. So some teenagers have to
work
, they
share
work
and studying and tear themselves apart
consequently
they do not finish
college
.
Therefore
, living farther from
home
can
cause
some problems for young
generation
. In
conclusion
, it is believed that it is better for pupils to be farther away from
house
than living at
home
. Both situations are beneficial, but living with
father
and
mother
can be more comfortable and not hinder any issues during the
student
's
life
.It is believed that to live in the
distance
from parents for students is much better. I partly agree with
this
viewpoint
point
as living far will teach to be independent as well as can
cause
some social problems. On
one
hand
, there are some aspirants who cannot live or do not want to live at
home
due to some circumstances. For
instancee
an occurrence of something
instance
instance e
instances
instanced
, some young people
study
in cities, but live in rural areas and they have to live separately.
This
can be beneficial for them as being far from family can teach the young
generation
to be independent or how to survive in any situations. What's more, they will completely concentrate on the
study
without disturbing from
house
deals.
Thus
, it makes clear why living in
distance
is best for them.
On the other
hand
, when pupils live separately, they
face
some emotional issues like feeling homesick, especially the ones in the
first
year
because they get used to being under their
father
’s wings and living in
comfort
.
As a
result
, they cannot survive and leave
university
. Another
disadvantage
of being an independent
student
is that it requires more
money
to pay for their
accommodation
, travelling and meals. So some teenagers have to
work
, they
share
work
and studying and tear themselves apart
consequently
they do not finish
college
.
Therefore
, living farther from
home
can
cause
some problems for young
generation
. In
conclusion
, it is believed that it is better for pupils to be farther away from
house
than living at
home
. Both situations are beneficial, but living with
father
and
mother
can be more comfortable and not hinder any issues during the
student
's
life
.It is believed that to live in the
distance
from parents for students is much better. I partly agree with
this
viewpoint
point
as living far will teach to be independent as well as can
cause
some social problems. On
one
hand
, there are some aspirants who cannot live or do not want to live at
home
due to some circumstances.
For
instance
, some young people
study
in cities, but live in rural areas and they have to live separately.
This
can be beneficial for them as being far from family can teach the young
generation
to be independent or how to survive in any situations. What's more, they will completely concentrate on the
study
without disturbing from
house
deals.
Thus
, it makes clear why living in
distance
is best for them. On the other
handd
the (prehensile) extremity of the superior limb
hand
hands
had
, when pupils live separately, they
face
some emotional issues like feeling homesick, especially the ones in the
first
year
because they get used to being under their
father
’s wings and living in
comfort
.
As a
result
, they cannot survive and leave
university
. Another
disadvantage
of being an independent
student
is that it requires more
money
to pay for their
accommodation
, travelling and meals. So some teenagers have to
work
, they
share
work
and studying and tear themselves apart
consequently
they do not finish
college
.
Therefore
, living farther from
home
can
cause
some problems for young
generation
. In
conclusion
, it is believed that it is better for pupils to be farther away from
house
than living at
home
. Both situations are beneficial, but living with
father
and
mother
can be more comfortable and not hinder any issues during the
student
's
life
.It is believed that to live in the
distance
from parents for students is much better. I partly agree with
this
viewpoint
point
as living far will teach to be independent as well as can
cause
some social problems. On
one
hand
, there are some aspirants who cannot live or do not want to live at
home
due to some circumstances.
For
instance
, some young people
study
in cities, but live in rural areas and they have to live separately.
This
can be beneficial for them as being far from family can teach the young
generation
to be independent or how to survive in any situations. What's more, they will completely concentrate on the
study
without disturbing from
house
deals.
Thus
, it makes clear why living in
distance
is best for them.
On the other
hand
, when pupils live separately, they
face
some emotional issues like feeling homesick, especially the ones in the
first
year
because they get used to being under their
father
’s wings and living in
comfort
.
As a
result
, they cannot survive and leave
university
. Another
disadvantage
of being an independent
student
is that it requires more
money
to pay for their
accommodation
, travelling and meals. So some teenagers have to
work
, they
share
work
and studying and tear themselves apart
consequently
they do not finish
college
.
Thereforee
Suggestion
Therefore
Therefore e
Therefor
, living farther from
home
can
cause
some problems for young
generation
. In
conclusion
, it is believed that it is better for pupils to be farther away from
house
than living at
home
. Both situations are beneficial, but living with
father
and
mother
can be more comfortable and not hinder any issues during the
student
's
life
.It is believed that to live in the
distance
from parents for students is much better. I partly agree with
thiss
denotes a person or thing
this
viewpoint
point
as living far will teach to be independent as well as can
cause
some social problems. On
one
hand
, there are some aspirants who cannot live or do not want to live at
home
due to some circumstances.
For
instance
, some young people
study
in cities, but live in rural areas and they have to live separately.
This
can be beneficial for them as being far from family can teach the young
generation
to be independent or how to survive in any situations. What's more, they will completely concentrate on the
study
without disturbing from
house
deals.
Thus
, it makes clear why living in
distance
is best for them.
On the other
hand
, when pupils live separately, they
face
some emotional issues like feeling homesick, especially the ones in the
first
year
because they get used to being under their
father
’s wings and living in
comfort
.
As a
result
, they cannot survive and leave
university
. Another
disadvantage
of being an independent
student
is that it requires more
money
to pay for their
accommodation
, travelling and meals. So some teenagers have to
work
, they
share
work
and studying and tear themselves apart
consequently
they do not finish
college
.
Therefore
, living farther from
home
can
cause
some problems for young
generation
. In
conclusion
, it is believed that it is better for pupils to be farther away from
house
than living at
home
. Both situations are beneficial, but living with
father
and
mother
can be more comfortable and not hinder any issues during the
student
's
life
.It is believed that to live in the
distance
from parents for students is much better. I partly agree with
this
viewpoint
point
as living far will teach to be independent as well as can
cause
some social problems. On
one
hand
, there are some aspirants who cannot live or do not want to live at
home
due to some circumstances.
For
instance
, some young people
study
in cities, but live in rural areas and they have to live separately.
Thiss
Suggestion
This
can be beneficial for them as being far from family can teach the young
generation
to be independent or how to survive in any situations. What's more, they will completely concentrate on the
study
without disturbing from
house
deals.
Thus
, it makes clear why living in
distance
is best for them.
On the other
hand
, when pupils live separately, they
face
some emotional issues like feeling homesick, especially the ones in the
first
year
because they get used to being under their
father
’s wings and living in
comfort
.
As a
result
, they cannot survive and leave
university
. Another
disadvantage
of being an independent
student
is that it requires more
money
to pay for their
accommodation
, travelling and meals. So some teenagers have to
work
, they
share
work
and studying and tear themselves apart
consequently
they do not finish
college
.
Therefore
, living farther from
home
can
cause
some problems for young
generation
. In
conclusion
, it is believed that it is better for pupils to be farther away from
house
than living at
home
. Both situations are beneficial, but living with
father
and
mother
can be more comfortable and not hinder any issues during the
student
's
life
.It is believed that to live in the
distance
from parents for students is much better. I partly agree with
this
viewpoint
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