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Teenagers relationship with parents most of the time is not at its best what are the solutions?

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Today
,
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,
in
this
 epoch of modernization where for the sake of keeping up with up-to-date
,
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,
everyone is changing especially teenagers. Teenager is the definite period where they start gaining new knowledge and getting expose
to
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of
 the reality of the world. At
this
age they
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age, they
 credence the huge sense of freedom which always leads to conflict with their parents at certain extent
,
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,
which is the problem
face
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faced
 by the parents whole over
world
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the world
. Undoubtedly,
their
in or at that place
there
 are so many ways to tackle
this troubles
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these troubles
.
Firstly
,
for
instance we
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instance, we
 should make parents
to understand
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understand
 that their
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
children's
 are no more
kids they
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kids, they
 have
acumen
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the acumen
 for what they are doing. We can teach them what is
correct but
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correct, but
 don't engross them to do right always as we have to learn from our mistakes.
Secondly
,
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,
parents should ignite and propel their children to share their problems
,
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,
always give suggestions and advices as a
friend which
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friend, which
 will help them feel
more comfort
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more comfortable
 in sharing their thoughts.Don't judge their thoughts all the
time which
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time, which
 will distance the relationship more.
Lastly
,
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,
at some extent let them do what they feel like doing,
for
instance let
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instance, let
 them bring their friends for night stay
,
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,
let them go for trips or to visit
new place
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new places
a new place
the new place
 with their friends. Sometimes ask them about
trouble
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the trouble
 they face in school and what is their plan. Don't order them to do things
,
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,
instead
 give advices and suggestion to make them feel the
important
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importance
 of their thoughts. In
conclude
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concluding
,
their
in or at that place
there
 is always a way to improve
parents relationship
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the parents' relationship
parents' relationship
parent's relationship
 with their teenager
,
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,
however
 It's more of a
parent
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parent's
 responsibility to improve that relationship as teenagers are still at the stage of understanding the way of
world
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the world
.
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