Some people say modern innovations bring a lot of problems than benefits. Do you agree or disagree ?

Escalation in technology has brought

comforts

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the comforts

of great extent right into people's

hands which

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hands, which

they can avail by a click.

However

, many people consider that these ameliorations as proved to have had more deleterious effects than positive ones.I vehemently concede that latest inventions certainly have more demerits than merits. Predominant reason to support my view is that though the ease that these innovations avail to humans has sky rocketed but at the same time the pernicious effects they have both on

environment

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the environment

and living beings cannot be neglected or justified. The noxious emissions from automobiles and air conditioners has degraded the quality of

air making

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air, making

it unfit to breath in.And

this

further

results

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result

in inflicting many with

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a number

of respiratory diseases and the studies

have shown

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has shown

that people prone to

such

health hazards have inclined over the years. Another reason in line with my ideology is that

instead

of modern gadgets being an aid for house chores, people have surrendered themselves to them and rely entirely on them for

even tiniest bit

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even tiniest bits

the even tiniest bit

of work.

This

has turned

population

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the population

into caving into sedentary and lethargic lifestyle which again causes

multitude

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a multitude

of diseases, obesity being the leading health hassle which births many serious maladies. Ergo

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agglomerating above mentioned points it can be concluded that modern innovations are a bane that in one or the other way causes

number

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a number

of diseases which affects both humans and environment negatively.