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Many people nowadays travel abroad for their university education. Why do people do this? Would you consider doing this yourself and why?

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Nowadays, students planning to travel abroad for their university education. There are two reasons behind it in my point of view. One is to get better career as chances are high to get the best job with international degree. Another reason is to explore the distinct education standards as per their choice I believe people are more interested because they want to show their status of travelling out of the country for studies to get recognition in the society. Consider an example of a poor student who can achieve the same degree in the home place. If could Persie my studies in the home country as either I or my parents were not able to bear the expenses of study in abroad. So I prefer to study hard and spend more time in achieving standards. If we achieve a degree and got the best job it is more than enough to stay back. So I strongly agree studies at home country or abroad are same if we have the dedication and determination towards the goal
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