should countries invest in building transport systems? discuss both views ans express an opinion

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Nation's should focus on equipping themselves with better
transport
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facilities.Some people believe that
building
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building, transport
transport
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hubs and mediums should be given more priority, whilst others argue that the budget allocated for building the
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facilities should be utilized for the
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of other areas as they could not imagine the impacts of undeveloped transportation facilities on the life of other people. In my opinion, developing
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facilities should be given more weightage as it promotes
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the overall development
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of the society. On the one hand, individuals who live in cities and are financially capable do not understand the importance of public
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for the lay- man. They have own conveyance to visit places either for work or pleasure.
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, they find using public-
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time consuming.
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, individuals in
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developing
countries
can not
can not
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understand the hardships people face in a developing economy.
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, I do not agree
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with
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approach because many times poor people from remote locations are not even able to access medical facilities on account of undeveloped connectivity.
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, good transportation facilities aid in economic
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of the region along with better facilities. As far distant locations
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get
connected organizations reach these areas to promote their products.
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, people in these areas
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get
employment and become capable to avail facilities like education and
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health care
. Due to increase in demands for better living these facilities pave their paths to reach the people in those areas.
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, A government in India reported overall
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of state after it increased its focus on developing transportation facilities. I agree with
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approach as it is for the betterment of the society. In conclusion, some people are limited in their knowledge about the problems a bigger section of society face due to the undeveloped
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facilities.
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However many
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However, many
others, along with me, promote
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development
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for the benefits of overall growth and availability of facilities.

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