should countries invest in building transport systems? discuss both views ans express an opinion
Nation's should focus on equipping themselves with better
transport
facilities.Some people believe that Use synonyms
building
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building, transport
transport
hubs and mediums should be given more priority, whilst others argue that the budget allocated for building the Use synonyms
transport
facilities should be utilized for the Use synonyms
development
of other areas as they could not imagine the impacts of undeveloped transportation facilities on the life of other people. In my opinion, developing Use synonyms
transport
facilities should be given more weightage as it promotes Use synonyms
overall
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the overall development
development
of the society.
On the one hand, individuals who live in cities and are financially capable do not understand the importance of public Use synonyms
transport
for the lay- man. They have own conveyance to visit places either for work or pleasure. Use synonyms
Moreover
, they find using public-Linking Words
transport
time consuming. Use synonyms
For example
, individuals in Linking Words
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countries Suggestion
developing
can not
understand the hardships people face in a developing economy.can not
cannot
However
, I do not agree Linking Words
to
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with
this
approach because many times poor people from remote locations are not even able to access medical facilities on account of undeveloped connectivity.
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On the other hand
, good transportation facilities aid in economic Linking Words
development
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gets
connected organizations reach these areas to promote their products. Suggestion
get
As a result
, people in these areas Linking Words
gets
employment and become capable to avail facilities like education and Suggestion
get
healthcare
. Due to increase in demands for better living these facilities pave their paths to reach the people in those areas.Suggestion
health care
For example
, A government in India reported overall Linking Words
development
of state after it increased its focus on developing transportation facilities. I agree with Use synonyms
this
approach as it is for the betterment of the society.
In conclusion, some people are limited in their knowledge about the problems a bigger section of society face due to the undeveloped Linking Words
transport
facilities. Use synonyms
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others, along with me, promote Accept comma addition
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development
for the benefits of overall growth and availability of facilities.Use synonyms
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