The graphs below show the average retirement age for men and women in 2004 and 2008 in six different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the average retirement age for men and women in 2004 and

2008 in six different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting

the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given column graphs compare the
retirement
age
of males and females in six countries in 2004 and 2008.
Overall
, the
retirement
age
increased in all countries with the exception of Italy, among
men
, and France, among
women
, where it remained the same in the given
years
. The Danish
men
and
women
retired at the ages of 60 and 59 respectively in 2004, but in 2008 they
both
retired at the
age
of 61. The average
age
of
retirement
for
both
genders was the lowest in France, with the
men
retiring at the
age
of 58 in 2004 and at 59 in 2008.
Women
retired at the
age
of 58 in
both
the given
years
. The Italian
men
retired at 60
years
in 2004
as well as
2008,
whereas
women
retired at a younger
age
in
both
the
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years
as compared to
men
. The
age
of
retirement
for
women
was 58 in 2004 and 59 in 2008. A similar trend in
retirement
ages was seen among the Dutch, Swede and British males and females with
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increase of one year in each case in 2008 as compared to 2004.
To conclude
, a striking feature of the graph is that the
retirement
age
for
both
sexes was the highest in Sweden in comparison with all other given countries.
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