The diagram below shows how paper is made and recycled.

The diagram below illustrates the

process

of manufacturing

a

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paper

and the way it is recycled. The

process

of creating a

paper

has five steps.

Firstly

, the radiata pine thinnings are collected and

then

bark

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of the wood is removed by a special drum called

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the De-barking

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De-barking

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Debarking

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drum in

second

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step. The de-barked wood is

then

sent to a chipper and

afterwords

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afterwards

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a thermomechanical refiner which

utillises

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utilises

water Afterwards the product is sent to a

paper making

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machine. The recycling

process

of

paper

has six steps, starting with the

paper

products

such

as newspapers. Talking about the

second

step, the used

paper

is directed to kerbside collection and

subsequently

to after collection. It

is

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then

go

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through a

de-inkking

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de-inking

process

and fine screening happens

next

. Later it is mixed

by

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thermomechanical and

recycle

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pulp with the use of water. In the

end

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the

last

product

is send

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back to the

paper making

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machine to recreate

paper

.