The chart below illustrates the result of a British survey on the types of houses people liked, taken in 2005.
The given column graph illustrates housing preferences among
people
who lived in the British cities of London
, Oxford
and Cambridge
in the year 2005. Four types of houses
are mentioned, such
as flats, terraced houses
, detached houses
and semi-detached houses
. 58% of Londoners listed ‘flats’ as their preferred living arrangement, a number much higher than its Oxford
and Cambridge
counterparts, at 29% and 20% respectively. Fondness of terraced housing was roughly equal between the three cities, all of which showed figures within the 16% to 19% range. However
, a stark difference was seen among the figures representing people
who preferred detached houses
, with London
at 9%, Oxford
at 25% and Cambridge
at 36%. 17% of people
living in London
in 2005 preferred semi-detached
style of housing. Correct article usage
a semi-detached
Oxford
and Cambridge
, however
, both had figures of 27%. Overall
, people
of Correct article usage
the people
London
preferred flats and the people
of Cambridge
preferred detached houses
.Submitted by iambrijeshpatel19 on
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