In order to be successful at a sport, some think you must be physically strong while others believe mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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order
to be successful at
a sport, having a strong Suggestion
in
physics
and mental are important. Some view says that in Suggestion
physical
order
to achieve success
in sport, physical strength
is more important than mental strength
. Other
view says Suggestion
Another
otherwise
.
The first
view says that having a strong body
can gain success
easily. When you have a strong muscle, high endurance, stable composure, you can become a good athlete. Cristiano Ronaldo, for example
, is one of the strongest footballers in the world. He gained his success
on the football career because of his body
. He could dribble easily and win on body
-to-body
action because of his muscular body
. Also
, with his tall body
, he could easily score
many goals by jumping on a shorter opponent and score
with his head. With his endurance level, he doesn’t get tired easily. He could sprint for 90 minutes total and make a great impact on his team. When he was facing Barcelona, he scored a quad-trick with his own head. With his tall body
, he jumped as high as he can and beat other opponent’s physical strength
.
On the other hand
, some people argue that mental strength
is more important. Sport is not just about practical skill
, but it is also
about technical skill
. By having a high mental strength
, great tactics, steady mind, you could also
gain a win easily. Lionel Messi, the “Baloon D’ Or” (best player) winner, focuses more on technical skill
rather than practical skill
. He does not have a strong muscle, tall body
, and steady composure. With his mental strength
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strength, such
such
as great tactics, high preparations, high mentality, he could score
many goals easily. One of his matches against Real Madrid, he scored 6 goals by using his tactics. He used a tactic called “Tiki Taka” (focus on pass rather than rush) and that mental strength
made an easy win on
his team.
When it comes to sports, I believe that mental Suggestion
for
strength
is more important than physical strength
. When you have a strong body
, of course you could beat your opponent easily. But it’s pointless to only focus on your strength
. In order
to score
a goal in football, you ought to have a strong mental strength
. It’s not about how hard you can kick
a ball
, but it’s about the tactics on how you kick
it. When you kick
a ball
, it’s important to look at the tactics such
as whether you kick
with your outside foot or knuckle, how you measure the wind in order
to get the right curve, and many more. As proven, Messi is better than Ronaldo because of his mental strength
. Ronaldo tends to kick
a ball
as hard as he can and that could mislead the ball
’s target. On the other hand
, Messi tends to kick
a ball
with the best tactics he could think and that gave him the best player award.
In conclusion, physical strength
and mental strength
are important in order
to gain success
at sports. Physical strength
gives you a better body
in order
to compete with others, while mental strength
gives you a better mindset and tactics. However
, in sports, mental strength
is more important than physical strength
. In order
to win on
any competition, it is better to have a better preparation and the best tactics. 2 years ago, I attended a boxing match. One with big muscles while the other with small muscle but more prepared. With his preparation, he beat Suggestion
in
the strong
opponent easily with his tactics. That kind of mental Suggestion
stronger
strength
led him to a win and a success
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