You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. write a letter to your friend. In your letter .give details of your study plans .explain why you want to get a part-time job .suggest how your friend could help you find a job write 150 words.

Dear Rohit, It's been
long
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since we have spoken. I am writing
you
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to tell you that I am coming over to your city, London for my
post graduation
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in Law and I will be needing your help to find me a part-time job. You remember the
last
time we meet, I told you about the Law college in London, I
finally
got admission there, which is why I will be staying in London for the
next
two years.
Although
the main exams will be at the end of each term, I will have to study regularly to perform well in my weekly evaluations. I will be having classes all days of the week, but I will be free over the weekends. Even though mom and dad are ready to sponsor my routine expenses, I do not wish to burden them unnecessarily.
Therefore
, I want to work part-time so as to support myself during
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stay.
This
will
also
give me
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first
-hand work experience and improve my resume when I finish my course and I hunt for a full-time job.
Hence
, I would like you to help me write a strong resume which I would be needing when I apply for work.
Also
, I want you to give me some references wherein I can directly apply. Write me soon Lots of Love, Sonia

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Educational aspirations
  • Work experience
  • Financial independence
  • Resume (or CV)
  • Local job market
  • International student
  • Legal requirements
  • Student work permit
  • Employment trends
  • Time management
  • Networking
  • A part-time position
  • Balance studies and work
  • Job hunting strategies
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