Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together while others think that people and communities are become more isolated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The effect of
internet
Suggestion
the internet
to people is debatable. It is argued that the internet connects people closer while
other
Suggestion
the other
thinks that it seclude humans and communities from each other.
This
essay will discuss both views in details and provide reasons and examples why the
first
argument is superior than the latter one. Internet has been widely used as a powerful tool for communication.
For example
, the presence of social
medias
a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
such
as, Facebook, Messengers and Skype, helps people to communicate and update each other's life with just one click.
In addition
, people living or working in a far place can easily access the internet
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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