The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates how electricity is produced in
geothermal
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a geothermal
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power
plant
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plants
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. It can be observed that
geothermal
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the geothermal
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electric power generation process consist of five major
process
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processes
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, namely, cold
water
storage, the injection well, the production well,
condenser
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the condenser
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and
electric
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the electric
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generator. In the first process, cold
water
is stored in a large storage tank constructed on the ground
while
this
cold
water
is pumped down to 4.5 km beneath the ground to the injection well. The cold
water
then
passed through
Geothermal
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a Geothermal
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zone called hot rocks, which boils the
water
.
This
hot
water
is accumulated in the production well
,
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and
thereafter
pumped up to the condenser. The condenser stores the hot steam, which is passed through a narrow opening to the turbine forcing the turbine to
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the spine
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spine
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spin
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. When the action of the turbine rotates the generator that
generate
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generates
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the necessary electricity, the produced electricity is
transfer
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transferred
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to various location using
power
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the power
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grid for various usages.
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