The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates how electricity is produced in

geothermal

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a geothermal

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power

plant

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plants

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. It can be observed that

geothermal

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the geothermal

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electric power generation process consist of five major

process

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processes

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, namely, cold

water

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storage, the injection well, the production well,

condenser

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the condenser

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and

electric

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the electric

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generator. In the first process, cold

water

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is stored in a large storage tank constructed on the ground

while

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this

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cold

water

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is pumped down to 4.5 km beneath the ground to the injection well. The cold

water

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then

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passed through

Geothermal

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a Geothermal

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zone called hot rocks, which boils the

water

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This

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hot

water

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is accumulated in the production well

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apply

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and

thereafter

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pumped up to the condenser. The condenser stores the hot steam, which is passed through a narrow opening to the turbine forcing the turbine to

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the spine

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spine

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spin

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. When the action of the turbine rotates the generator that

generate

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generates

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the necessary electricity, the produced electricity is

transfer

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transferred

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to various location using

power

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the power

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grid for various usages.

bibhu.kalitaMon Jan 27 2020

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

154 words

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