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You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events’ organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know about my interest to work as an
organizer
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 at your Social
event
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. Since I have worked as a social volunteer previously, participating in your organized social
event
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 will be
quite
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 enjoyable task for me. I would like to request you regarding some information about your
event
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. Would you please let me know the work schedule for that
organizer
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 post
please
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? Though I will be busy on the weekdays because of my
month long
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 training program, I will be completely free during the weekends and I am hoping to utilize my leisure time effectively. Prior to that, I would
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 like to know
about
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if there is
any
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 age restriction
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 is often imposed by most
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the
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organizations. Working in a social
event
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 is not something
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 is new to me and participating in
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 events gives me immense pleasure. Previously, I have worked as an
organizer
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 in some blood donation campaigns quite several times back in India. I
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 have participated in several rescue missions during natural calamities in
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last
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 5 years which enriched my experience greatly. As
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, I strongly believe, gathering all these experiences will help me to secure that
organizer
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 post in your social
event
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. Thanks for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Md. Abul Hasnat

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • expressing interest
  • enthusiastic
  • responsibilities
  • expectations
  • relevant experience
  • suitability
  • organise
  • co-ordinate
  • engage
  • social activities
  • detailed information
  • demonstrate proficiency
  • prior experience
  • effective communication
  • successful events
  • team collaboration
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