Many people believe that social networking sites have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

#people #sites #impact #individuals #society

In recent years

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social networking sites

such

as Facebook

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Twitter has created

detrimental effect

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a detrimental effect

on most of the people in

entire world

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the entire world

.In my opinion

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I strongly agree that it makes person less social and isolated so they feel less confident and stressed.

Firstly

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one

of the important demerit of social networking sites is that

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people

can not

cannot

take participation in social activity.Even they like to spend their time alone in their room.

Consequently

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they had fear

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communication with their peer which makes them less confident and their overall development suffers which shows its impact in later years.

Secondly

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most of people like to make contact with the person whom they

never seen

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have never seen

are never seen

never saw

and in future not possible for them to meet

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still they want to contact them and they never think of their friends and families.At

last

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they feel that no

one

their

in or at that place

there

to look after and feel isolated which is

one

of the

reason

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reasons

for their stress. Another important reason is that children are using these sites more and their psychological level has no idea that what

photoes

they have to put on the internet because it stand for the years and

some

a human being

someone

one

use it in

different way

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a different way

different ways

Likewise

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some

one

has

create

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created

fack

fraudulent; having a misleading appearance

fake

identity and take benefits of

some

a human being

someone

one

.These would affect the person emotionally and mentally. In conclusion

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however

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advancement in technology allows people to communicate with others at any corner of

world but

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the world, but

the world but

affect

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affects

social

activites

any specific behavior

activities

activists

and individual mental and physical

abilites

the quality of being able to perform; a quality that permits or facilitates achievement or accomplishment

abilities

Goverment

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The government

Government

should has

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should have

to start

awarness campaign

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an awareness campaign

awareness campaign

for social

activites

any specific behavior

activities

activists

Tue Jan 28 2020

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Topic Vocabulary:

social isolation
virtual interactions
mental health
feelings of inadequacy
anxiety
depression
misinformation
destabilize
privacy concerns
data breaches
productivity
foster connections
educational content
social activism

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