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What factors do you think are important in promoting a higher standard of education?

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There is an increasing requirement for ever-higher levels of
education
 globally.
Factors
 contributing to a higher
level
 of
education
 can be divided into two different groups: internal and external. Internally, governments of most nations
eager
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 to have
high-educated
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 citizens, so more funding has been allocated to the educational sector.
As a result
 of more funding,
that
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 leads to more resources, a higher standard of
education
 has become possible.
Also
, one of the most influential
factors
 is the
level
 of teaching which involves better teacher training.
Consequently
, given better teacher training, it follows that better-prepared teachers would mean a higher
level
 of
education
. There
also
 have been several external
factors
.
First,
the continuous development of the job market tends to permanently
increasing
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 requirements for potential employees.
Thus
, they are usually required to have different certificates and diplomas, which has resulted in pressure
from
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 students to raise their educational
level
. The increasing rivalry has led to a higher request for educational
level
.
In addition
, it is believed that the expected salary depends on educational achievements so
this
 acts as a factor in promoting a higher standard of
education
.
Due to
 the market's demand for
high-qualified
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 specialists, governments of different countries develop international
education
 programs that allow deepening students' knowledge. Summarising, I can assume that the main
factors
, influencing on
promoting
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a
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higher standard of
education
, are governments' aim to have well-educated citizens and the market's demand for
high-qualified
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highly qualified
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 specialists.
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