Some people think that cooking is an important skill for young people to learn. Others believe that it is better for people to learn how to cook after they become adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The bar graph illustrates the percentages of spare
time
was utilised in male and female of five different worker categories between 1998 to 1999. Overall, the highest amount of leisure
time
was enjoyed by both jobless and retired
group
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groups
.
Conversely
, the men, who were part-
time
job-holder
an employee who holds a regular job
jobholder
jobholders
, had no interest about free-
time
. In
men
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a men's group
men's group
group
, unemployed spent the maximum amount of vacation, which was about 85%.
Besides
, retired community was the
second
-highest
group
, who enjoyed around 82% of spare
time
.
In contrast
, in female
group
, there was an equal amount of holiday spent in both jobless and retired sector; and the quantity was roughly 79%.
Moreover
, exactly 50% of women spent vacation, which was 10% more than a part-
time
worker.
Finally
, just below 40% of full-
time
worker used leisure
time
in a week, which was the least
between
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among
the other in the chart.

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