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Many people nowadays travel abroad for their university education. Why do people do this? Would you consider doing this yourself and why?

#people #travel #university #education
This
 letter serves as an introduction to Mr. Arjun Yadav Mattapalli, who I understand is making an application to study the Master’s Program. He had been a student of Electrical Power Systems Engineering from 2011 to 2013 and graduated with a
first
-class. It is a pleasure writing
this
 recommendation for Arjun Yadav, as he is one of the talented students in the department.
Besides
 his academic abilities, he possesses appealing personality and effective communication skills.
In addition
 to my interaction as a member of the research review committee of the Department, I have
also
 taught him Flexible AC Transmission his thesis supervisor. He exhibited a lot of curiosity and was on time with all his assignments and
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class work
.
In addition
 to regular classes, he continued to take advantage of various technical events held in college and outside. He has displayed a good grasp of programming languages that helped him get selected for campus placement with Tata Consultancy Services as Assistant System Engineer. His thesis work is to
analyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
 and design an Electrical distribution network by the analytical method and
also
 by using Software programming Owing to his remarkable keenness on widening and strengthening his research potential and under my supervision, he has
also
 published a research paper titled “Analysis and Design of Reinforced Concrete Long Cylindrical Shell” in an International Conference Proceedings. He has
also
 written a review paper titled “Effects of the
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Nano Silica
 Addition on Cement Concrete,” which is under review in Elsevier - Material Today: Sustainable Material Science. Overall, I rate him among the top 5% of students that I have taught. Equipped with his hands-on work experience received over the
last
 several years, he will bring a mix of practical
understanding experience
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understanding, experience
 and academics together with his strong interpersonal skills. I strongly recommend Mr. Arjun Yadav for a graduate program at your esteemed university with financial support due to his wide range of skills and an astounding profile.

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