some people think that teenage years are the happiest time of the most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Teenage years and
adult
life
have both contrasting life
descriptions, may it be responsbilities
, or how just one simply views each point in life
. While some think that teens might have the best time
of their lives, others also
contrast, thinking that adults bring more happiness than the latter.
Some believed that teenage years are the best stage of their lives. During this
time
, younger individuals tend to experience the "firsts" in their lives. I must say, as teens, they are more impulsive to try new things for the first
time
. Making new friends are
a trend. In the event of having new companies, teenagers go out with them more often and discover new things together. They tend to go on some adventures and find themselves embarking new Suggestion
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was
journies
, and in turn making memorable memories. a daily written record of (usually personal) experiences and observations
journals
journeys
guns
For instance
, I started to bloom and make out friends during the first
year in secondary school. I tried to go on
places for the Suggestion
to
first
time
without my parents with me. During those moments, it gave me a feeling of freedom whenever my parents were away and were not with me. Hence
, in this
point in life
, having new acquiantances
do good to have someone to share the joy with.
personal knowledge or information about someone or something
acquaintances
Adult
life
, on the other hand, as some say, can also
be the happiest point in life
despite the responsibilities placed on their plates. Older individuals tend to find job opportunities that could suffice their needs and their families'. In Filipino culture, it is such
a joy for an adult
who works, to be able to pay their parents back for all that had spent in nurturing and sending them to schoo;s
. It is an educational institution
schools
such
a pride for
the family that an Suggestion
of
adult
can ease the burden by taking up some responsibilities, most especially when it comes to financial matters. Thus
, despite the accountabilities one adult
faces, it still gives them joy knowing that they were able to help lighten up the burden of the family.
In conclusion, the happiness of either stage of life
depends on how one percieves
it. As for teens, they enjoy to become aware of through the senses
perceives
life
with their friends. Meanwhile, adults, despite the challenges placed at
them, it still gives them gladness knowing that they were able to help with the problems of the family.Suggestion
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