Nowadays public transport prices are constantly increasing. Why do you think it is happening? How can this problem be solved?

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The steady accelerating rate of fair public
transport
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is becoming a common
problem
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for many societies. Various reasons cause
this
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problem
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. But,
governments
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could certainly take steps to tackle
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issue. The higher fares are the result of higher costs for
transportation
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agencies. In my opinion, flawed economic policies of
governments
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are the main factors that can be blamed as a cause of
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problem
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for the general public.
Firstly
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, most countries
are remained
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dependent on fossil fuels. Nonrenewable resources
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as gas and oil as a main source of energy are used for means of public
transport
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systems. Fluctuation in the price of fossil fuels which is happening nowadays leads to raising the expenses of vehicles that rely on them. Another issue in
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economical
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policies of authorities is imposing more taxes on
companies
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who are running the public
transport
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systems. In order to alleviate the existing
problem
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, there are some feasible solutions. One step that can be mentioned is that
governments
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should begin to put some investments in
transportation
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companies
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to help them to substitute the
transportation
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means
which
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rely on nonrenewable energy with new ones that are using sustainable resources
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as solar and wind power.
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, the government should impose higher taxes on privately owned cars and decrease the duty of public
transport
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agencies.
This
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policy can encourage citizens to use public
transports
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transport
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such
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as
train
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trains
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and
busses
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which
also
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has a good impact on
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the economical
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economical
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growing
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of these
companies
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. In conclusion, there
would
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be always an increase in fares of public
transportation
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systems unless
governments
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take steps
for aiding
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transportation
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agencies
to eliminate
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in eliminating
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fossil fuel vehicles and
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them with environment-friendly ones and by decreasing imposed taxes on these
companies
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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