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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals.

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Many doctors believe that how people feel depends on
colors
a flag that shows its nationality
colours
 so it is crucially important to give more focus on
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
 while
coloring
a digestible substance used to give color to food
colouring
 various places. I agree with
this
 statement to
large extent
Suggestion
a large extent
 and provide my opinion on how
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
colours
 influence people’s
health
 and jobs.
Firslty
, talking about
health
,
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
 have various negative
impact
Suggestion
impacts
 on human life.
Although
 more
broght
emitting or reflecting light readily or in large amounts
bright
brought
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
 on object is
aesthetic but
Accept comma addition
aesthetic, but
 watching on same
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
 for
long period
Suggestion
a long period
long periods
 of time can hamper vision of
eye.
Suggestion
the eyes
M
oreover people
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Moreover, people
suffer from s
orts
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the sorts
of eye diseases.
f
or
Suggestion
For
instance, Ram suffered from colorblindness just after 2 m
onth
Suggestion
months
of painting his house with dazzling red
c
olor.
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
 In conclusion, it is better to choice
c
olor
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
according to
health
 condition
.
Accept space
.
s
econdly,
Suggestion
Secondly
c
olor
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
a
slo have
Suggestion
also has
also have
p
ower
Suggestion
the power
to gain a
ttention
Suggestion
the attention
of workers in o
ffice
Suggestion
offices
the office
which result disadvantages for
company
. W
orker
Suggestion
A worker
who
w
ork
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works
in front of objects which is highly c
olored
having color or a certain color; sometimes used in combination
coloured
can put labourer in d
ilema
state of uncertainty or perplexity especially as requiring a choice between equally unfavorable options
dilemma
and l
oose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
their concentration from tasks. In result, slowing p
rocess
Suggestion
the process
of
work
.
Furthermore
, too shiny
c
olor
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
c
an be reflect
Suggestion
can reflect
can be reflected
on electronic devices like computers, t
elevisons
broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects
televisions
television
and make job holders arduous to perform their activities.
For example
, recently did research in the best
company
 of n
epal
a small landlocked Asian country high in the Himalayas between India and China
Nepal
called B
rother
Suggestion
the Brother company
company
, w
orker
Suggestion
the worker
spent actually double time to do s
ame
Suggestion
the same work
work
 which was done in
l
ast year
Suggestion
the last year
after c
oloring
a tract of land with few or no trees in the middle of a wooded area
clearing
colouring
the
company
 with intense white
c
olor.
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
 In conclusion, vivid
c
olor
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
colours
can cause serious
health
 problem
such
 as colorblindness and
also
 affect the speed of w
orker
Suggestion
the worker
a worker
workers
to
work
 in o
ffice.
Suggestion
an office
the office
In my opinion
,
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,
it is vitally essential to check
c
olor
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
and their features while decorating certain places like hospital
,
Accept space
,
offices.
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