Should government make decisions about people's lifestyle, or should people make their own decisions?
looking
at the todays Suggestion
Looking
senario
, most of the people's lifestyle is not running smoothly. an outline or synopsis of a play (or, by extension, of a literary work)
scenario
Government
can build some Suggestion
The government
rules but
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rules, but
also
people can make their own schedule so that they can find what they love to do and motivate themself
. In reflexive form of "them"
themselves
this
eassy
I will discuss on both views.
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
issue
First
of all, we are in living in democratic nation
so a Suggestion
a democratic nation
country
ruler can make a decision Suggestion
country's
on
us. Suggestion
for
Government
can bring a major impact on public's lifestyle by conducting a health awareness program so that society member could Suggestion
The government
gets
benefits. Suggestion
get
Authourity
Suggestion
The authority
Authority
Authorities
also have
to make a certain rules on Suggestion
also has
has also had
thier
daily works, which can help people of them or themselves
their
tire
third
to give
their potential on their habits. Suggestion
give
For example
, Prime Minister of Nepal had declare
Suggestion
had declared
a
average working hours of employees is 7-8 hours and Suggestion
an
a
Suggestion
an
organazation
should a group of people who work together
organization
organisation
complusary
conduct a fitness program once a week.
On the other hand
, most people, they like what they do. In some area government can make a rules
for their Suggestion
rule
life style but
at the same time some people are self motivated. They love what they do and gives their Accept comma addition
lifestyle, but
lifestyle but
attension
on their building their habits, no matter how busy they are. When people make their own programs about Suggestion
attention
attentions
it they
feel more Accept comma addition
it, they
enthusistic
and they follow till for having or showing great excitement and interest
enthusiastic
enthusiasts
long term
. For Suggestion
the long term
instence
, my friend an occurrence of something
instance
instances
live
in Suggestion
lives
kathmandu
, morning he goes to college and afternoon to the capital and largest city of Nepal
Kathmandu
works but
he manages his time Suggestion
work, but
work but
atleast
1 hours for his lifestyle as he is thinking of.
In Suggestion
at least
consclusion
, when it a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
consolation
conclusions
come
to peoples Suggestion
comes
life
style, its depend on individual how they want their life
to be like. Well in
some part government have to make some rules Accept comma addition
Well, in
where
mainly its depends on human have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
were
life
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