Stress-related illnesses are becoming increasingly common. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggests?
People are increasingly suffering from sicknesses
as a result
of stress
. This
essay
will discuss two main causes of stress
-related sicknesses including longer working hours and increased job pressures. This
essay
will also
suggest solutions to these problems, including one's work
-life balance and diet
.
People are working longer hours than ever before. In addition
, they have more job pressures. People place themselves under these unfavourable conditions because the workforce is a competitive domain. For example
, some people aspire to climb the corporate ladder to gain high status and a high paying job. This
often results in mental and physical suffering because they have to work
overtime and take on additional roles which can be stressful.
Maintaining a good work
-life balance and improving one's diet
are both critical to mitigating stress
related illnesses. People need to realise that if they live only for work
they will suffer either mentally or physically and a poor diet
will further
exacerbate these issues. For example
, many employees burnt out from working too much and neglecting family, friends, exercise and hobbies as well as the food they eat. Therefore
, in order to reduce work
one must include a better ratio of work
, rest, recreation and dietary sustenance.
In conclusion, in today's fast paced world, more and more people are becoming ill as a result
of stress
. This
essay
discussed how stress
is often caused by long working hours and intense workplace pressure. This
essay
also
suggested that the solutions to this
problem are twofold: to manage a better work
-life balance and to eat healthier diet
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