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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

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Businessmen have established plenty of toy factories throughout technology so far. Thereby, parents could
purchased
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purchase
 many toys and
this
 fact
have made
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has made
 a discussion among experts and people. What are their
beneficials
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benefits
beneficial
beneficiaries
 or drawbacks? Following these sentences, the topic is handled. Parents might try to get toys for their kids, because they think both of them are effective and better than
technologic
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
technological
 screens
such
 as mobile phone, smart devices. Some experts,
however
, think that the more your children get toys, the more they might catch an infection, because they include different chemicals and lack of information about their process. I sometimes see some news on television channels about the proofs of
this
 thesis and these apprehensions are understandable.
For example
, In Turkey, we have lots of
toys
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toy
 shops and these toys
such
 as cars, trains, barbie dolls are not safety
although
 people buy them for their kids. .
Moreover
, Toys are hazardous in terms of gender inequality because children might learn by play with them, as well as observing people.
For instance
, as you give a barbie your children, you would say that you need to be like
this
 toy, which is suitable for beauty standard of our society. One and the same, if your boy
take
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takes
 a toy gun or a knife,
this
 would mean to be
agressive
having or showing determination and energetic pursuit of your ends
aggressive
 not
also
 using physical force but
also
 these real tools. In my opinion, children ought not to be exposed these toys so that they could
be protected some
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be protected with some
 chemical substances, as well as annihilating of gender discriminations. There would be a basic rule that buying toys, which improve children's intelligence level
such
 as
puzzle
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a puzzle
.
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