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Some people think that children who spend a lot of time reading children's story books are wasting their time which could be better used doing other more useful activities. To what extent do you agree?

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Reading a lot of
story
 books by children's leisure activity is debatable. Some people claim that it is a waste of
time
instead
 children can do other useful activities. I completely disagree with
this
 statement. Reading
story
 books improve the
language
 skills in children and other useful activities like playing outdoor games, drawing and painting might not be of any help to a
child
 who is not interested in these activities.
Firstly
, reading a
story
 book at an early age will improve a
child
's learning ability.
In addition
, the
language
 skills will develop
for instance
, children can develop good vocabulary and grammar.
Moreover
, the cognitive ability of these tender brains will develop when they read more
story
 books.
For example
, Sherlock Holmes the great detective writer was a voracious reader during his childhood days.
Therefore
, reading
story
 books is not a waste of
time
instead
 it will help the children to develop their
language
 skills.
Secondly
, other useful activities like playing games outside, drawing or painting might not suit everyone. Because some children who are physically challenged cannot play outside.
Similarly
, not all children are interested in art,
instead
 they may prefer to study. To cite an example, I was never interested in drawing or painting during my childhood days, despite my parents insisted that it was a good activity.
Although
, some free
time
 activities are universally accepted as good, still reading
story
 books is not a bad choice. In fact, it has more positive effects on the overall personality development of a
child
. In conclusion, even though free
time
 activities like drawing and painting are useful, some children might not be interested.
However
, spending
time
 by reading
story
 books will benefit children to enhance their
language
 skills.
As a result
, it is not a waste of
time
instead
 every
child
 must be encouraged to read books.
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