Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Undoubtedly public
health
is one of the most important issues that has concerned all governments around the world. Although
many individuals believe that adding the number of types of sports equipment can enhance people's health
, others including
me deem that Accept comma addition
others, including
such
solution is not sufficient and the government
has to find other ways. (
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On the one hand, providing more sports facilities Accept space
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a key role in rising public Suggestion
plays
health
. Firstly
, the more types of recreational equipment should be provided, the more motivation will be seen in society. For example
, installing myriad sports instruments on the parks, markets and so forth, can persuade people to use them. Secondly
, such
instruments will be easy access because of the high number of them as a result
, individuals have not
to pass long ways and waste their time to arrive at sports places. Accept comma addition
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On the other hand
, two practical solutions have many beneficial effects on public health
. The former is an appropriate diet for people. What are the most important roles that should have obeyed by everyone, are to avoid eating both junk foods
and soft drinks. Suggestion
food
Furthermore
, eating more nutrient vegetables like either spinach or carrot can enhance the body's defense
system as well. These activities ought to be expanded by the (military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies
defence
government
by using TV programs. The latter is happiness. according
to scientific Suggestion
According
researches
, can not only happiness improve public Suggestion
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health
, but also
it can prolong the average people's lifetime So, the government
must hold many festivals and play a lot of fun programs on TV. Doing such
solutions result in to have a healthy society. (
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In conclusion, I think that the Accept space
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government
should pay attention more to other ways
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ways, such
such
as providing a healthy diet and also
making happy individuals rather than just increasing the number of sports instruments. (34 words)Submitted by amirhoseyn.toorani on
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