In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not to build new homes there. What is your opinion

Opinions are divided whether to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
basic need
Suggestion
basic needs
the basic need
a basic need
of people it is recommended to build
new home
Suggestion
a new home
new homes
on
countryside
Suggestion
the countryside
.
However
, some averse with
this
suggestion as they are in favour of protecting natural environment. Here in
this
case as far as my view is concerned
than
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
I would like to say that roof is utmost important to any person with little bit of planning, we can construct them in
rular area
Suggestion
rural areas
rural area
a rural area
without causing much damage. The chief reason for my
view point
a mental position from which things are viewed
viewpoint
is today every city is facing overpopulation due to that pollution, traffic congestion creates and
this
viscous cycle goes on. Not only that
,
Accept space
,
in
cities land
Suggestion
the city's land
city's land
city land
is limited.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
, one cannot keep on adding more infrastructure in congested places.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Ecological benefits
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Sustainable development
  • Eco-friendly building materials
  • Green architecture
  • Government policies
  • Urban sprawl
  • Infrastructure
  • Smart planning
  • Agricultural lands
  • Rural areas
  • Population growth
  • Environmental sensitivity
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