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now a days , more and more foreign students are going to English speaking countries to learn the International language English . it is undoubtedly true that studying English in an English speaking country is the best way, but it is not the only way to learn it. do you agree or disagree

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English is one of
the fast
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the fastest
fastest
 growing and
second
 most common language spoken by different ethnic groups throughout the world. In recent years, more students from non-English speaking countries are travelling to English speaking countries to learn English. In
this
 essay, I argue about students
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 to foreign countries to learn English and other options available to do it. Yes, learning English in a place where the environment forces us to learn it in our day to day activities will enhance our learning. Because, even for communicating with the native
population we
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population, we
 have to speak in
English so
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English, so
 it will automatically improve our learning.
For example
, even to ask someone how to reach a place in a bus, we have to do some homework our self before asking them. So, studying English in an English speaking
country
 will directly and indirectly helps us to learn fast.
On the contrary
, going to a foreign
country
 to study is going to be very expensive. Even in a
country
 like India
,
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,
 now-a-days more and more educational institutes are coming with new concepts of teaching. Some of the schools and colleges are strictly following English as their
first
 language and they are teaching English in easily understandable methods. So studying English in their own
country
 will decrease the expense and
also
 give comfort of being in their
country
. In my opinion
,
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,
 studying in a comfortable, less expensive place like our own
country
 is better than going to a foreign nation for studying English. If we are determined to learn and progress we will be able to do the same in our land itself.

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