The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.--DELETED LINK--

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The graph gives information about Burnaby Public Library between 2011 and 2014. It shows how many library

books

people read over

this

four-year period. As can be seen from the graph, there were different trends for

men

and women. The number of

books

read by

men

increased steadily between 2011 and 2012, from about 3000 to 4000. After that, the number rose dramatically to 14000

books

in 2014.

This

was the highest figure in the period. Women started off reading more

books

than

men

, but their numbers followed a different pattern. Between 2011 and 2012, there was an increase of 3000 from 5000

books

to 8000

books

, and

then

a gradual rise to 10000

books

in 2013.

However

, in 2014, their numbers fell back to 8000 again.

Overall

, there was a strong upward trend in the number of

books

read by

men

Although

women read more

books

than

men

in 2011, their reading fell to below the level of

men

in 2014.

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