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The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The below chart illustrates the
number
 of
Japanese
 going abroad as
tourists
 between the
years
of
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1985 and 1995 (in a decade) and the share of Australia as the destination market for these
tourists
.
Overall
, the
number
 of
Japanese
tourists
 has been in
gradual
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a gradual
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 increase
from
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since
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 1985 reaching
the
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a
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 peak in
in
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1995
around
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at around
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 15 million
while
 the percentage that used to go to Australia has
also
grew
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 from 2% to 6% on average, showing to be a great market destination for
Japanese
. In common, the
number
Japanese
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of Japanese
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tourists
 going abroad has increased dramatically presenting
three fold
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 growth in the decade between 1985 and 1995. At the beginning of the period, the
number
 of
tourists
 was about 5 million in 1985.
Although
 there
were
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annual
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an annual
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 steady increase,
but
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the
years
 1991 and 1993 did not show a notable jump compared to their previous
years
.
Apart from
this
,
Japanese
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the Japanese
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 tourism sector has
went
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gone
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 up dramatically. Australia’s tourism market has attracted
Japanese
tourists
 at an alarming rate. It rose from 2$ in 1985 to 6% in 1995. It indicated steady growth except
1989
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in 1989
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 and 1994
that
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which
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 illustrated a low drop compared to the previous
years
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, japanese, tourists, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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