The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The below chart illustrates the

number

of

Japanese

going abroad as

tourists

between the

years

of

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1985 and 1995 (in a decade) and the share of Australia as the destination market for these

tourists

.

Overall

, the

number

of

Japanese

tourists

has been in

gradual

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a gradual

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increase

from

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since

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1985 reaching

the

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a

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peak in

in

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1995

around

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15 million

while

the percentage that used to go to Australia has

also

grew

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from 2% to 6% on average, showing to be a great market destination for

Japanese

. In common, the

number

Japanese

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of Japanese

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tourists

going abroad has increased dramatically presenting

three fold

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growth in the decade between 1985 and 1995. At the beginning of the period, the

number

of

tourists

was about 5 million in 1985.

Although

there

were

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annual

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an annual

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steady increase,

but

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the

years

1991 and 1993 did not show a notable jump compared to their previous

years

.

Apart from

this

,

Japanese

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the Japanese

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tourism sector has

went

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up dramatically. Australia’s tourism market has attracted

Japanese

tourists

at an alarming rate. It rose from 2$ in 1985 to 6% in 1995. It indicated steady growth except

1989

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and 1994

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which

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illustrated a low drop compared to the previous

years

.