You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter say where and when the class will be held give reasons why you think your friend might be interested suggest a time and place to meet to discuss the idea

Dear Jill, I want to let you know about

this

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great opportunity for us to learn more about

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cooking. Our local college has advertised that they are going to introduce a

10 week

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course on

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cooking. Classes will be held twice a week (Tuesday and Thursday), starting at 6 pm and running for 8 weeks. The

first

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class starts

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week and all classes are held at the college, which is just so convenient for us both! I remember that when we went to Jakarta

last

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year you raved about the food, so I know you’ll be interested in going to these classes. Just imagine what it would be like, being able to cook our own

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meals. There will

also

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be guest chefs from some of Sydney’s top

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restaurants. I can hardly wait! How about you? Let’s meet to discuss

this

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idea. How about getting together on Friday for dinner? Let me know if you’re free and I’ll make a booking for 7 pm.

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of course! Love Jenny

Thu Jan 30 2020

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

173 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

enroll
local college
cooking class
schedule
benefits
learning new skills
diverse cuisines
bonding
shared activity
enrollment
meetup
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