You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter • give details about the concert • describe how you won the tickets • explain why you’ve chosen your friend to go with you.
Dear Jot,
Hello, How are you? I hope you'll be healthy and wealthy.A long time has been passed to
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you ,so It's Correct your spelling
see
the
time for meeting and having fun with each other.I let you know that I won two tickets Correct article usage
apply
of
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to
music
concert and want to share Correct article usage
a music
this
moment with you by spending precious time by
inviting you.
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apply
Last
Sunday, I participated in singing
competition which was conducted by Jack William Add an article
a singing
at
Delhi. I got the Change preposition
in
first
position and received two tickets of
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to
music
concert ,which will be held Add an article
a music
on
13march at Jaipur. It's a city known as pink city and I know you're very excited in Change preposition
in
college
days to see the culture of that city.
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your college
On the other hand
, I did lot
of Change the article
a lot
efforts
to win Fix the agreement mistake
effort
this
competition for us. My father gave me motivation
to perform because they want to make our friendship bond stronger. I sacrificed my nights to get Change the article
the motivation
first
position because of reward, which I knew how to get?
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the first
Lastly
, I'ld
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I'd
I'll
like
to invite you to come and join a concert with me. I remember you are a music lover. I'm very excited to meet you soon.I booked our tickets and do other arrangements regarding accommodations. Don't worry about other things.Change the verb form
likes
lets
enjoy the old memories again.
See you soon.
With regards,
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let's
let us
Sivgun
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Sign
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite