Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding the punishment. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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Today, I will be discussing about the level of punishments that are given in result
for
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of
the crimes.
Crime
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The crime
itself is the crucial matter for every culture and country. I have been asked to discuss my views on the punishments for crimes. According to the Laws and regulations of the
counrty
a politically organized body of people under a single government
country
county
, it is fixed punishment for the specific crime. I believe so, changing the punishments according to the circumstances in which the crime is done, is not possible.
Becasue
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Because
according to the policies, all criminals are equal in eyes of
court
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the court
a court
. Changing the
punishmenst
the act of punishing
punishment
punishments
for each individual would be considered as
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and impractical.
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, there will be no clear cut
boundries
the line or plane indicating the limit or extent of something
boundaries
for the
individuals'
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individual
situation.
For example
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, if a person who is a thief is given consideration for low level of punishment, just because he is poor will become an excuse for other criminals. If I see the other side, I would not agree
on
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in
with
the belief of people where they believe that the criminals should be helped if they were forced to commit a crime or cases like they had no other options left. Because there are proper ways to take help from police to report them if an individual was
been
the state or fact of existing
being
forced for something which is against the laws.
Hence
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, according to me the level of punishments should be same, irrespective of the situation of the criminal.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fixed punishments
  • consistency
  • predictability
  • deter crime
  • potential offenders
  • streamline
  • judicial process
  • bias
  • corruption
  • complexity
  • human behavior
  • circumstances
  • justice system
  • intent
  • remorse
  • socio-economic background
  • rehabilitate offenders
  • recidivism rates
  • flexible punishment systems
  • inconsistencies
  • perceived injustices
  • public trust
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